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Subject: Typos and others in RM and MC specs
I happened to read the RM and MC specifications a bit more carefully today (was stuck on a long flight) and here are a list of items that I think need to be addressed. These are based on the recently approved CD versions.
-- Sanjay
WS-ReliableMessaging
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437, 438 reads - The RM Destination then reclaims any resources associated with the Sequence.
I think this should be- The RM Source then reclaims any resources associated with the Sequence.
739: Typo
Replace - /wsrm:CloseSequence@{any}
With - /wsrm:CloseSequence/@{any}
763: Typo
Replace - /wsrm:CloseSequenceResponse@{any}
With - /wsrm:CloseSequenceResponse/@{any}
811: Typo
Replace - for the closing Sequence
With - for the terminating Sequence
884: For the sake of consistency with rest of the spec
Replace - allow different types
With - allow (extensible) different types
936: Typo
Change "As" to "as"
1044: Typo
Change - fault generated an RM Destination
With - fault generated by an RM Destination
1124: Typo
Change - wsrm:FaultCodes
With - wsrm:FaultCode
1130:Typo
Change - Sequence information
With - Sequence fault information
1133:Typo
Change - set of fault
With - set of faults
1138 & 1140: This text is not what is typically used for describing extensibility elements and attributes in the rest of the spec. Is this a cut-paste error?
1241, 1242: Can't parse this sentence
1259: Typo
Replace - ability identify
With - ability to identify
1410: Can't parse. I think replacing "and with" by "with" might do the trick.
1515: Can't parse. I think replacing "use inclusion" by "inclusion" might do the trick
1632: The fault wsrm:UnsupportedSelection is not described in the main spec. It should be moved to MC spec!
WS-MakeConnection
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279: Typo
Replace - "of a two"
With - "of two"
454:Typo
Replace - /wsmc:MessagePending@pending
With - /wsmc:MessagePending/@pending
633: Typo
Replace - UnsupportedElement
With - UnspportedSelection
<Also MissingSelection fault is currently not defined in the schema>
851: Fix the font towards the end of this sentence
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