Re: [ws-rx] Groups - WSRM-CD4.zip uploaded

[Pete Wenzel <pete.wenzel@Sun.COM>]

Good comments, Paul.  In addition, the HTML rendition lacks line
numbers; this makes it difficult to cite and locate text precisely.

I suggest that we ask Mary to include a notation like this in the PR
announcement:

  The HTML-formatted specifications are provided for informational
  purposes only; all comments should be made against the PDF versions,
  which are to be considered authoritative.

This has been done for at least one other TC that I remember.  (In
that case, the HTML rendering was actually superior.)

--Pete

Thus spoke Paul Cotton (Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com) on Thu, Aug 17, 2006 at 01:44:37PM -0700:
> Initial comments on the RM HTML:
> 
> a) Status section uses an unusually small font.  This is different than the PDF text.
> b) Standalone URLs and XML fragments use an unusally small font.  This is different than the PDF text.
> c) All the XML fragments I have reviewed have lost their indentation.  This includes the XML Schema and WSDL files in the Appendices.
> d) The Event and State Name example cells appear to have an extra blank line in them.
> e) All the Detail fragments I have reviewed have lost their background colour.  This is different than the PDF text.
> 
> /paulc
> 
> ________________________________________
> From: gilbert.pilz@bea.com
> Sent: August 17, 2006 3:59 PM
> To: ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: [ws-rx] Groups - WSRM-CD4.zip uploaded
> 
> The document revision named WSRM-CD4.zip has been submitted by Gilbert Pilz
> to the OASIS Web Services Reliable Exchange (WS-RX) TC document repository.
>  This document is revision #5 of WSRM-CD4.zip.
> 
> Document Description:
> CD4 package of files
> RM spec, RMP spec, WSDL, XSD and diffs from CD3
> Add HTML version; directory structured for deployment on doc.oasis-open.org
> 
> View Document Details:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-rx/document.php?document_id=19802
> 
> Download Document:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-rx/download.php/19802/WSRM-CD4.zip
> 
> Revision:
> This document is revision #5 of WSRM-CD4.zip.  The document details page
> referenced above will show the complete revision history.
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Pete Wenzel <pete.wenzel@sun.com>
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