Consolidated clarification summary

[Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>]

This incorporates the clarification I proposed, as revised in our  
discussion, the XPath clarification, and the typo clarifications.

Changes to original motion:
MOTION, s/amended/clarified
k s/mechanisms/protocol mechanisms to be used
k s/SASL/SASL mechanisms

additional charter clarifications
Section C, Security policies, 1.c remove version on XPath reference

Typo's corrected
Section C, typo in third paragraph: TCís should be TC's
Section C, Security Policies, 6.e typo: "Properties for indication"  
should be "indicating"
Section D, typo in last paragraph: TCís should be TC's

(note attached version is from  Original Call for Participation
http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/tc-announce/200510/msg00006.html

some typos appear to have been introduced in web version)

Attached is a red-lined PDF for context.

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia

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MOTION:
Shall the charter of the OASIS WS-SX TC be clarified as follows?

Modify the following sentence in the charter:
c. Specifying the scope of each returned security token using WS- 
Policy [5] <wsp:AppliesTo>.

TO READ AS FOLLOWS:
c. Specifying the scope of each requested and returned security token  
using WS-Policy [5] <wsp:AppliesTo> (eg. wsa:endpointReference).

After the following sentence in the charter:
j. Specifying characteristics of the requested type of keys.

ADD THE SENTENCE AS FOLLOWS:
k. Enabling additional negotiation and challenge mechanisms to be  
used (e.g. SASL mechanisms, SPNEGO) initiated by either client or  
server.

Modify the following sentence in the charter:
2. Actions and elements for responding with a renewed token.

TO READ AS FOLLOWS:
2. Actions and elements for responding with a renewed token (or tokens).

Modify the following sentence in the charter:
2. Actions and elements for responding about the validity of a token.

TO READ AS FOLLOWS:
2. Actions and elements for responding about the validity of a token  
(or tokens).

After the following sentence in the charter:
7. Definition of APIs

ADD THE SENTENCES THAT FOLLOW:
8. Definition of additional negotiation and challenge protocol  
mechanisms.
9. Developing the roadmaps [15], [16] or other specifications  
mentioned in those roadmaps, beyond the material listed explicitly as  
within the scope of this charter.

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WS-SX-Charter-Clarification-redlineC.pdf