Hi William,
Yes, I'm on the east coast, in New Hampshire...I don't have an opinion
on PDF .vs. Word, and don't have adobe authoring tools either, but
don't let this stop you from going with a PDF :-) I can say that
either is better than nroff!
Anyway, here is the balance of my MUWS edits. I hope I haven't skipped
anything needing attention, and hope I haven't changed the semantics or
intentions of the document language.
Regards,
Mark
Vambenepe, William N wrote:
Hi Mark,
Assuming you're on East Coast time that means I should be able to have
the final version out today. I assume we want a PDF instead of a Word
doc for the final?
I got the message loud and clear on line numbering, I won't touch them
for 0.5.
William
-----Original Message-----
From: Mark Ellison [mailto:ellison@ieee.org]
Sent: Friday, April 02, 2004 1:23 PM
To: Vambenepe, William N; wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Re: [wsdm] RE: MUWS 0.5change document- clarity updates
William
Actually, my day is going better than I had anticipated and
I'll likely
have time to finish the rest of my edits and pass them along
this afternoon.
Regards,
Mark
Vambenepe, William N wrote:
Mark,
Considering the value of your suggested improvements, I
think it's worth
waiting until Monday. If you can send me your corrections by 4:00
Pacific time I should be able to have the final version out that
evening.
I'll leave the line numbers unless a majority of other
people weigh in
between now and Monday to indicate that they'd rather have
them removed.
Regards,
William
-----Original Message-----
From: Mark Ellison [mailto:ellison@ieee.org]
Sent: Friday, April 02, 2004 7:40 AM
To: Vambenepe, William N
Cc: wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Re: [wsdm] RE: MUWS 0.5change document- clarity updates
William,
...your welcome! I'm happy to work through the remainder of
sections, but may be unable to do another read through before Monday.
Hope that's not too late.
I'm ambivalent about removing the numbering, especially for the
0.5 release. The numbering makes it easier to correlate problems
reported on the document.
Regards,
Mark
Vambenepe, William N wrote:
Thanks a lot Mark, you did a great job. Re-reading the
spec now I
understand better what I have written... ;-)
I implemented 99% of your comments. I also included
updated WSDL and XSD
sent by Igor.
I am looking forward to the rest of your corrections
Mark. If possible,
please tomorrow work off of the document I just checked
in for
everything below 4.2.1:
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/download.ph
p/6202/cd-w
sdm-muws-0.5.doc
Also, I am thinking of removing line numbering in the
final version. It
is great for reviews but not useful for final spec since
some people
will get it in HTML, PDF, Word, printed in a book, etc.
So people
shouldn't rely on line numbers, and usually don't when
they use specs,
they use section numbers. If someone really wants line
numbers in let me
know, otherwise I'll remove them in tomorrow's (final)
version.
Regards,
William
-----Original Message-----
From: Mark Ellison [mailto:ellison@ieee.org]
Sent: Thursday, April 01, 2004 8:14 PM
To: Vambenepe, William N;
wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: MUWS 0.5change document- clarity
updates
Hi,
I made it through sxn 4.2.1. page 19....
Regards,
Mark
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