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Subject: RE: [wsdm] Groups - wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041127.doc uploaded
<snip> [One such element of metadata on properties] should be [One such metadata on properties] But that doesn't sound right. I've never seen the word metadata used in such a way. If you want to avoid using the word element, try replacing it with "piece" or "item" or some other such word. Ian | -----Original Message----- | From: Sedukhin, Igor S [mailto:Igor.Sedukhin@ca.com] | Sent: Tuesday, November 30, 2004 12:41 AM | To: Vambenepe, William N; wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org | Subject: RE: [wsdm] Groups - | wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041127.doc uploaded | | My comments on the subj: | | 121-122: [portType element information item] it is either | element or EII | but across the document. Pick one. I suggest the "element". | The document | jumps from one to the other and that is not appropriate. | | 255 shold better say [choice of an implementation approach] | | 288 [resource-specific] was just fine over there, I believe. I do not | understand why is this wording bifurcation happening in that | sentence... | | 301 [allows for a range of coverage]... [gradual coverage]... Just say | [covers equally well starting from the low-end manageability up to the | high-end manageability]... | | 309 should be [This flexibility] | | 361 [One such element of metadata on properties] should be [One such | metadata on properties] and similarily [Capability is an element of | metadata that] should be [Capability is metadata that]. This use of | "element" is confusing here with its meaning of an XML element | throughout the document. | | 420 [permitting virtually free-form expression of events.] | This is very | fancy. It is not really free form, is it? There is a form | given here and | unless it conforms to it it ain't a WSDM event. So I suggest that this | statement is removed. One may simply state [WSDM event format is | extensible.] Which is already stated somewhat in the sentense above | this. | | 421 I do not believe that Figute 6 is at all necessaary. We have only | used UML to represent individual capabilities so far. Never any data | models. It is not consistent to represent some data and not | the other. I | suggest that we keep using UML for only the capability models | (properties, operations, events. | | 516 [The manageability capability URI for the Identity capability is] | why not just say [This capability is identified by the following URI] | | 538-540 That stuff just hangs out there without any obvious attahment. | Why not precede this with [This property has the following metadata:] | and indent the lines. | | 592 [characteristics of a manageability interface rather than the | resource.] I think not. I think [characteristics of a manageability | endpoint implementation rather than the resource.] | | Schema: | | I suggest that we do <xs:group instead of <xs:complexType. I do not | understand how [CorrelatablePropertiesPropertiesType] is useable by | anybody else. I don't know why is it there if it is not useable. | | | -- Igor Sedukhin .. (igor.sedukhin@ca.com) | -- (631) 342-4325 .. 1 CA Plaza, Islandia, NY 11749 | | | -----Original Message----- | From: vbp@hp.com [mailto:vbp@hp.com] | Sent: Saturday, November 27, 2004 10:56 PM | To: wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org | Subject: [wsdm] Groups - wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041127.doc uploaded | | The document wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041127.doc has been submitted by | William Vambenepe (vbp@hp.com) to the OASIS Web Services Distributed | Management (WSDM) TC document repository. | | Document Description: | | | Download Document: | http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/download.php /10267/wd- | wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041127.doc | | View Document Details: | http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/document.php ?document_ | id=10267 | | | PLEASE NOTE: If the above links do not work for you, your email | application may be breaking the link into two pieces. You may be able | to copy and paste the entire link address into the address | field of your | web browser. | | | | To unsubscribe from this mailing list (and be removed from | the roster of | the OASIS TC), go to | http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/members/leav e_workgrou | p.php. | | | | To unsubscribe from this mailing list (and be removed from | the roster of the OASIS TC), go to | http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/members/leav e_workgroup.php. | |
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