RE: [wsrp-interop] XML 2003 demo abstract

[Rich Thompson <richt2@us.ibm.com>]

Enhancements along the lines of these
suggestions have been incorporated. I will post an updated version for
further review during tomorrow's Interop SC call.

Rich

Andre Kramer <andre.kramer@eu.citrix.com>

09/24/2003 09:32 AM

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Could we change "portal vendors"
to "TC collaborators", please? I don't mind use of "Portal"
elsewhere in the text, and I'm certainly not a marketing person, but I
do know that we are more than just a portal vendor ;-)
 
Other comments (all minor):
 
"semantic of that interface"
sounds overly complex. How about "protocol" - i.e. in the old
diplomatic meaning?
 
two uses of "quickly"
- change first to simplify access?
 
"thereby by gain".
 
"generic code" - generic
means / without programming
 
"the consumption" -
markup & display?
 
regards,
Andre
-----Original Message-----
From: Rich Thompson [mailto:richt2@us.ibm.com]
Sent: 22 September 2003 13:45
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Subject: [wsrp-interop] XML 2003 demo abstract


Here is a draft for the abstract for our planned demo. Any comments and
suggestions would be appreciated. Deadline for submission is 29 September
... 



Rich