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Subject: [xacml-comment] resubmission: v_1.0 - niggling editorial nuggets

some things that i came across whilst pdf'ing:



line 520:
'...element from each of the policies or policy'
the word 'policy' is *half* bold.

line 793:
'[c01]		<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>'
inconsistent font (times)
actually, upon further inspection, the document seems to use proportionally spaced, sans serif fonts (e.g. 'arial') in the listings and example code starting at line 641 and continuing to line 826, at which point it uses the correct font, non proportional serif font (courier).

line 1039:
starting with line 1039 the examples are color encoded. the snippets prior to this are not. given the darkened background i think that the color makes it harder to read (and print), but either way i think that it should be consistent (sections 5 & 6 go back and forth twixt the two). this continues thorough [portions] of the primer.

line 3278:
there seems to be an extraneous border line above the row in the table

line 3291:
there seems to be extraneous border lines above each of the rows in this table

line 3385:
snippet font (should be 'courier')

line 3399:
i thought that the IBMDSA reference was replaced with an IEEE spec throughout the doc, or was this only in a specific instance?

line 4277:
'first argument of  Anderson@sun.com?'
question mark should be quotation mark

line 4434:
'      urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:resource:scope'
leading spaces or indentation (should be left margin aligned)

finally, there seems to be some squooshing going on with lines 2618, 2742, 2778 in the pdf. can others confirm?

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