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Subject: Re: [xacml-comment] resubmission: v_1.0 - niggling editorial nuggets
Dear bill parducci, Thank you for submitting your comment. The XACML TC response to your comments is: 0003a. line 520: '...element from each of the policies or policy' the word 'policy' is *half* bold. CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: Line 520, make word 'policy' all bold. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003b. line 793: '[c01] <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>' inconsistent font (times) actually, upon further inspection, the document seems to use proportionally spaced, sans serif fonts (e.g. 'arial') in the listings and example code starting at line 641 and continuing to line 826, at which point it uses the correct font, non proportional serif font (courier). CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: On lines 641-826, use non-proportional serif fonts. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003c. line 1039: starting with line 1039 the examples are color encoded. the snippets prior to this are not. given the darkened background i think that the color makes it harder to read (and print), but either way i think that it should be consistent (sections 5 & 6 go back and forth twixt the two). this continues thorough [portions] of the primer. CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: Remove all color-encoding from XML fragments in the document. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003d. line 3278: 'xacml:Policy:PolicySet' there seems to be an extraneous border line above the row in the table CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: Remove border line above xacml:Policy:PolicySet in the table following line 3278. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003e. line 3291: 'Urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:environment' there seems to be extraneous border lines above each of the rows in this table CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: Remove border lines between urns in table following line 3291. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003f. line 3385: '<AttributeValue' snippet font (should be 'courier') CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: Use courier font in schema fragment following line 3385. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003g. line 3399: '[IBMDSA]' i thought that the IBMDSA reference was replaced with an IEEE spec throughout the doc, or was this only in a specific instance? CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: In A.4, lines 3398-3399, change reference from "IBM Standard Decimal Arithmetic [IBMDSA]" to "IEEE Standard for Binary Floating-Point Arithmetic [IEEE754]". --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003h. line 4277: 'first argument of Anderson@sun.com?' question mark should be quotation mark CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: On line 4277, change 'Anderson@sun.com?' to 'Anderson@sun.com"' --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003i. line 4434: ' urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:resource:scope' leading spaces or indentation (should be left margin aligned) CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: Approved. ACTIONS: On line 4434, align "urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:resource:scope" with the left margin. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 0003j. finally, there seems to be some squooshing going on with lines 2618, 2742, 2778 in the pdf. can others confirm? CATEGORY: Editorial. STATUS: Resolved 14 November 2002. RESPONSE: "squooshing" confirmed. ACTIONS: Unsquoosh lines 2618, 2742, 2778. Sincerely, Anne Anderson, comments editor On 8 November, bill parducci writes: [xacml-comment] resubmission: v_1.0 - niggling editorial nuggets > From: bill parducci <bill.parducci@overxeer.com> > To: xacml comment <xacml-comment@lists.oasis-open.org> > Subject: [xacml-comment] resubmission: v_1.0 - niggling editorial nuggets > Date: Fri, 08 Nov 2002 10:01:51 -0800 > > some things that i came across whilst pdf'ing: > > b > > +++ > > line 520: > '...element from each of the policies or policy' > the word 'policy' is *half* bold. > > line 793: > '[c01] <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>' > inconsistent font (times) > actually, upon further inspection, the document seems to use proportionally spaced, sans serif fonts (e.g. 'arial') in the listings and example code starting at line 641 and continuing to line 826, at which point it uses the correct font, non proportional serif font (courier). > > line 1039: > starting with line 1039 the examples are color encoded. the snippets prior to this are not. given the darkened background i think that the color makes it harder to read (and print), but either way i think that it should be consistent (sections 5 & 6 go back and forth twixt the two). this continues thorough [portions] of the primer. > > line 3278: > 'xacml:Policy:PolicySet' > there seems to be an extraneous border line above the row in the table > > line 3291: > 'Urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:environment' > there seems to be extraneous border lines above each of the rows in this table > > line 3385: > '<AttributeValue' > snippet font (should be 'courier') > > line 3399: > '[IBMDSA]' > i thought that the IBMDSA reference was replaced with an IEEE spec throughout the doc, or was this only in a specific instance? > > line 4277: > 'first argument of Anderson@sun.com?' > question mark should be quotation mark > > line 4434: > ' urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:resource:scope' > leading spaces or indentation (should be left margin aligned) > > > finally, there seems to be some squooshing going on with lines 2618, 2742, 2778 in the pdf. can others confirm? > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------- > To subscribe or unsubscribe from this elist use the subscription > manager: <http://lists.oasis-open.org/ob/adm.pl> > -- Anne H. Anderson Email: Anne.Anderson@Sun.COM Sun Microsystems Laboratories 1 Network Drive,UBUR02-311 Tel: 781/442-0928 Burlington, MA 01803-0902 USA Fax: 781/442-1692
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