Re: [ekmi] Changes required to submitted document - SKSML

[Anil Saldhana <Anil.Saldhana@redhat.com>]

  Kim,
   thanks a lot for the suggestions. We will incorporate and resubmit 
the request.

Regards,
Anil

On 10/12/2010 08:02 AM, Kim Goolsby wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The suggestions
> are just that, suggestions only.
>
> Please make the following changes to this document:
>
> 1. On the title page, in 'This Version'&  'Previous Version', the underlying
> URIs were not updated correctly. Roll the cursor over these links to see the
> problem.
>
>     - For 'This Version', please change underlying URIs from
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr02/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxxto
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr03/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxx.
>     That is, please change /pr02/ to /pr03/.
>
>
>     - Similarly, for 'Previous Version', please change underlying URIs from
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr01/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxxto
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr02/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxx.
>     That is, please change /pr01/ to /pr02/.
>
> 2. In 'Related Work', the bullet for XML Signature - W3C Recommendation 12
> Feb 2002 contains an incorrect date. The document's date is actually 10 June
> 2008. I suggest correcting this.
>
> 3. Note that clicking on the link in 'Declared XML Namespace(s)' results in
> a broken link.
>
> 4. In the Status section, the underlying URI contains a misspelling, which
> results in a broken link. Please change the spelling of 'committeees' to
> 'committees'.
>
> 5. The date on the footer is incorrect. Please change from 18 November 2008
> to 5 August 2010.
>
> 6. Also on the footer, please change the copyright date from 2008 to 2010.
>
> 7, Please update the copyright date in the Notices section as well. Change
> to 2008-2010.
>
> 8. In 'Normative References', the formatting is off. I suggest moving 'http'
> back up to the left paren (as is done with the other references in this
> section). Note that this was correct in the last version.
>
> 9. Also, in 'Normative References', the date for [XML Signauture] is
> incorrect. I suggest changing it from 12 Feb 2002 to 10 June 2008.
>
> 10. Also in this section, [RFC 2578] contains a broken link. Upon googling
> this document I found a number of correct links, one of which was
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2578.txt. I suggest correcting this broken
> link.
>
> 11. To conform to the OASIS template, this spec should contain a
> Non-Normative References section, even though none are present. Please add
> this section followed by N/A to satisfy this requirement.
>
> 12. Please add the appendices to the Table of Contents.
>
> 13. Lastly, the line numbering is off beginning with [AES] in the Normative
> References' section. Please correct. This was correct in the previous
> version of this spec.
>
> Please contact me with any questions or comments.
>
> Best regards,
> Kim
>