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Subject: Re: [ekmi] Changes required to submitted document - SKSML
Kim, I have incorporated the changes and your suggestions. The zip is here. http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ekmi/download.php/39943/ekmi_spec_1.zip Regards, Anil On 10/12/2010 08:02 AM, Kim Goolsby wrote: > Hi all, > > My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The suggestions > are just that, suggestions only. > > Please make the following changes to this document: > > 1. On the title page, in 'This Version'& 'Previous Version', the underlying > URIs were not updated correctly. Roll the cursor over these links to see the > problem. > > - For 'This Version', please change underlying URIs from > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr02/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxxto > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr03/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxx. > That is, please change /pr02/ to /pr03/. > > > - Similarly, for 'Previous Version', please change underlying URIs from > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr01/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxxto > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr02/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxx. > That is, please change /pr01/ to /pr02/. > > 2. In 'Related Work', the bullet for XML Signature - W3C Recommendation 12 > Feb 2002 contains an incorrect date. The document's date is actually 10 June > 2008. I suggest correcting this. > > 3. Note that clicking on the link in 'Declared XML Namespace(s)' results in > a broken link. > > 4. In the Status section, the underlying URI contains a misspelling, which > results in a broken link. Please change the spelling of 'committeees' to > 'committees'. > > 5. The date on the footer is incorrect. Please change from 18 November 2008 > to 5 August 2010. > > 6. Also on the footer, please change the copyright date from 2008 to 2010. > > 7, Please update the copyright date in the Notices section as well. Change > to 2008-2010. > > 8. In 'Normative References', the formatting is off. I suggest moving 'http' > back up to the left paren (as is done with the other references in this > section). Note that this was correct in the last version. > > 9. Also, in 'Normative References', the date for [XML Signauture] is > incorrect. I suggest changing it from 12 Feb 2002 to 10 June 2008. > > 10. Also in this section, [RFC 2578] contains a broken link. Upon googling > this document I found a number of correct links, one of which was > http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2578.txt. I suggest correcting this broken > link. > > 11. To conform to the OASIS template, this spec should contain a > Non-Normative References section, even though none are present. Please add > this section followed by N/A to satisfy this requirement. > > 12. Please add the appendices to the Table of Contents. > > 13. Lastly, the line numbering is off beginning with [AES] in the Normative > References' section. Please correct. This was correct in the previous > version of this spec. > > Please contact me with any questions or comments. > > Best regards, > Kim >
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