Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business Rating ofServ

Subject: Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business Rating ofService Version 1.0

Hi all,

My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The suggestions are just that, suggestions only.

Please make the following changes to this document:

1. In 'This Version', the underlying URIs are incorrect. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-wd09.xxx to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-cd04.xxx. That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/.

2. In 'Latest Version', please change the text & underlying URIs from
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.

xxx

to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.xxx.

3. In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to regular weight.

4. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.pdf to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pdf, removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. Note that this was correct in the previous version.

5. In 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc]. The date is October 2006.

6. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005.

7. Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & pdf versions.

Please contact me with any questions or comments.

Best regards,

Kim

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