Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business ServiceLevel Agreement Version 1.0

[Kim Goolsby <kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org>]

TCADMIN-253

Hi all,

My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The suggestions are just that, suggestions only. 

Please make the following changes to this document:

1. In 'This Version', the underlying URIs for the doc & pdf files are incorrect. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-wd09.xxx to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-cd04.xxx. That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/.

2. In 'Previous Version', the document links are broken because the spelling of the filenames differ from those of the actual documents. Change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-BSLA-Spec-cd03.xxx to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.html. That is, change 'Spec' to 'spec'. Please remember to correct the underlying URIs as well.

3. Also in 'Previous Version', the underlying URI for the html file contains extra spaces at the end (%0D), which results in a broken link. Please remove.

4. In 'Latest Version', please change the text URIs from 

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xxx

 to 

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-BSLA-Specification.xxx

. That is, change 'bSLA' to 'BSLA'. The filenames in the underlying URIs are correct although two are broken links (see #5 below).

5. Also in 'Latest Version', the underlying URIs for  the html & doc files contain extra spaces at the end (%0D), which results in broken links. Please remove. 

6.  In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to regular weight. 

7. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.pdf to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pdf, removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. Note that this was correct in the previous version. 

8. In 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc]. The date is October 2006. 

9. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005. 

10. Also, in 'Normative References', for [ISO8601], I suggest changing this to a publicly-accessible URI. This link requires authenticated sign-in.

11. 

Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & pdf versions. 

Please contact me with any questions or comments. 

Best regards, 

Kim

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Kim Goolsby
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