RE: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business Rating ofService Version 1.0

["eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn" <eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn>]

Kim, 

All required changes for SOA-EERP bRating spec are fixed, and new version
of specs are uploaded onto TC repository @
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/documents.php . The
whole submission package is uploaded onto
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis
sion-package.zip. 

Please let me know if there are any problems on this new submission
package. 

Regards, 



Szu Chang 


Original Message:
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From: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2010 12:49:30 -0400
To: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org, mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP
Business Rating ofService Version 1.0


*TCADMIN-254 <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>*
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* <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**Hi all,

My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The suggestions
are just that, suggestions only.

Please make the following changes to this document:
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* <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**
1. In 'This Version', the underlying URIs are incorrect. Please change from
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-wd09.xxx to
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-cd04.xxx.
That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/.

2.
In 'Latest Version', please change the text & underlying URIs from

<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx
x>

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.<
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.h
tml%0D>
 xxx<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specificatio
n.xxx>

 to

<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx
x>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.<h
ttp://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.htm
l>
xxx.

3.  In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to
regular weight.

4. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please change
from
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.p
df
 to
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pd
f,
removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. Note that this was correct in the
previous version.

5. In 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc]. The
date is October 2006.

6. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to
[UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005.

7.
Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & pdf
versions.

Please contact me with any questions or comments.

Best regards,
Kim
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Kim Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society
email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
web: www.oasis-open.org
phone: 1.734.223.6890


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