Re: [ws-tx] - Re: Groups - New Action Item #0058 Review use of RFC2119 keywords ...

["Monica J. Martin" <Monica.Martin@Sun.COM>]

1. Change "must" to "MUST", lines 179,...

179 The Business Activity coordination context must flow on all 
application messages involved with the
180 transaction.

mm1: This may also be discussed in the context of one of the points in a 
newly submitted issue regarding similar text in WS-AT? (Reference:  NEW 
ISSUE: Other Editorial Issues Surrounding AI#0057 Review for RFC 2119 
(I#097), Submission 2, 
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-tx/email/archives/200610/msg00100.html).

>...3. Change "should" to "SHOULD", lines ...353,...
>
mm1: Tom, have you considered rewriting this sentence to be more 
consistent with other similar sentence structures, and improve 
understanding of the requirement:
Change from:
352 Upon receipt of this notification the participant knows that it will 
receive no new requests for work
353 within the business activity. It should complete application 
processing and transmit the
354 Completed notification.
Change to:
352 Upon receipt of this notification the participant knows that it will 
receive no new requests for work
353 within the business activity. The participant completes application 
processing and SHOULD transmit the
354 Completed notification.

3. Change "should" to "SHOULD", lines ...514

mm1: This may also be discussed in the context of one of the points in a 
newly submitted issue regarding similar text in WS-AT? (Reference:  NEW 
ISSUE: Other Editorial Issues Surrounding AI#0057 Review for RFC 2119 
(I#097), 
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-tx/email/archives/200610/msg00099.html).

However, many of the proposed changes in Sections 3.1 and 3.2 could be 
influenced in how we see the high-level diagrams, the surrounding text 
of these sections and their relationship to the state tables (See first 
reference: 
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-tx/email/archives/200610/msg00100.html).

Was this considered in your recommendations? Thanks.

>OASIS Web Services Transaction (WS-TX) TC member,
>Dr Ian Robinson has created a new action item.
>Number: #0058
>Description: Review use of RFC 2119 keywords ...
>Owner: Mr Thomas Freund
>Due: 27 Oct 2006
>
>Comments:
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>http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-tx/members/action_item.php?action_item_id=1720
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