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Subject: Comments on MOWS 1.1
- From: Heather Kreger <kreger@us.ibm.com>
- To: wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
- Date: Wed, 22 Feb 2006 21:45:46 -0500
Hi,
Whew!
Here's comments on MOWS 1.1 by line
number
43 - Broken Refs
182 - whats the funny s-ish sort of
symbol everywhere?
199 - grammer hard, suggest: 'It is
necessary to understand a number of important aspects of the WSDM architecture.
...'
229 - please substitute 'sufficient'
for 'good'
241 - formatting problems
425 - check the URIs for RF, N, and
A
610 - I think we need to add 'Units'
to all the metrics metadata,
658 - there's no units for ServiceTime
at all, even in the text
720 - suggest change 'some kind' to
'some kind at a particular time'.
all events sections - need to add that
Property change events will be wrapped in Management events and published
on the topics defined in that section.
1587 - no bold
1630, 1639 - is the WSA schema right?
Isn't there a new one? What is RF and N using?
Refs look good... Vaughn, can you use
these for MUWS ?
Great job Kirk... appreciate all the
hard work!
Heather Kreger
STSM, Web Services Lead Architect for SWG Emerging Technologies
Author of "Java and JMX: Building Manageable Systems"
kreger@us.ibm.com
919-543-3211 (t/l 441) cell:919-496-9572
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