Re: [bcm] Updated brochure draft

["Moretto,Laila K." <lmoretto@mitre.org>]

I've started to edit the document this weekend.   Not sure what the best way to do this editing that will make it easier for you and or anyone else to incorporate.  At this
time I am just doing track changes in red in a word document.   Is that acceptable???????????

Also, what is the deadline for our comments???

Thanks,

Laila Moretto

Neil Wasserman wrote:

> Attached is version of the BCM Brochure draft (first version sent Friday,
> 11/14/03) that has been formatted more appropriately (2-columns) for a
> brochure, and contains some small edits.  The length, now five pages, can be
> filled out with additional graphics, text, and white space to produce 6
> pages -- an 8 1/2 by 22 inch folded sheet with a single (8 1/2 by 11) sheet
> insert.  Or the material can be cut down to 4 pages.
>
> I shall be in DC tomorrow, not connected to e-mail, and can respond to
> comments Tuesday.
>
> Additional note: I came the following book which I've found quite valuable
> for issues related to BCM and business service integration.  The book is
> "Business Services Orchestration" by Waqar Sadiq and Felix Racca.  You may
> find the content of interest.
>
> Thanks in advance for your input.
>
> Neil Wasserman
>
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