RE: [bt-spec] BTP Issue 12 : Minor editorials

[Peter Furniss <peter.furniss@choreology.com>]

Most of these were also picked up by Gordon (issue 14) and Mark Little (issue 58).

 

I propose we accept these, with variations as noted

line: 580 "confirm some Inferiors" -> "confirm to some Inferiors"  

 

text from issue 14 preferred (changing can to may),making the sentence into:  An Atomic Superior will apply the same decision to all of its Inferiors; a Cohesive Superior may apply confirm to some Inferiors and cancel to others

 

line:   785 "An Decider also REQUEST_STATUS" -> "A Decider receives also REQUEST_STATUS"  

 

prefer ... also receives ... (as issue 58) 

Peter

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