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Subject: RE: [bt-spec] BTP Issue 12 : Minor editorials

Most of these were also picked up by Gordon (issue 14) and Mark Little (issue 58).
I propose we accept these, with variations as noted
line: 580 "confirm some Inferiors" -> "confirm to some Inferiors"  
text from issue 14 preferred (changing can to may),making the sentence into:  An Atomic Superior will apply the same decision to all of its Inferiors; a Cohesive Superior may apply confirm to some Inferiors and cancel to others
line:   785 "An Decider also REQUEST_STATUS" -> "A Decider receives also REQUEST_STATUS"  
prefer ... also receives ... (as issue 58) 


Peter Furniss
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