RE: [emergency-adopt] Emergency Datasheet Uploaded for Review

["Timm, Gary" <Gary_Timm@sra.com>]

Rex,
A typo and two wording questions:

In the very first paragraph, should it say, "OASIS, a not-for-profit..."
rather than, "OASIS, the not-for-profit..."?

At the bottom of Page 1, the URL for the EDXL Product Directory is
missing the ".org".

On Page 2 in the sidebar on the right, should the EMA-TC paragraph
description include the word "Technical" in front of Committee?
It now says, "Emergency Management Adoption Committee", without the word
"Technical".

Gary Timm
Senior Consultant
Touchstone Consulting Group
1920 N Street NW, Suite 600
Washington, DC 20036
Mobile: (202) 465-6394 
Gary.Timm@Touchstone.com

-----Original Message-----
From: Rex Brooks [mailto:rex.brooks@ncoic.org] 
Sent: Friday, September 17, 2010 1:20 PM
To: emergency-adopt@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [emergency-adopt] Emergency Datasheet Uploaded for Review


  Hi Everyone,

I have uploaded the Emergency Datasheet for review:

Download Document:
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39398/Emergency-datash
t.pdf


Cheers,
Rex



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