Using the line numbers found in the wd03 document, here’s the list…
Line 156 - extra blank
Line 189 – capital letter
Line 288 – extra period
Line 302 - extra ‘s’ on the word ‘distribution’
Line 312 - the snippet “for this element” is present in WD03, but had been removed in the re-write.
Line 330 – missing comma
Line 338 – “as broad or narrow” should be “is broad or narrow”
Lines 343-352 – (section 3) 4 word tweaks not incorporated
Lines 354-407 – (section 3.1) 9 word tweaks and corrections not incorporated
Line 417 – missing the word “anticipated”
Line 468 – sentence ends with 4 periods
Line 569 - capital letter
Line 574 - capital letter
There are a few things, like extra spaces in text, that are in all copies and were just spotted now…
Line 44
Line 46
Line 252
Line 564
Line 720
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Section 3.2 - Spectrum = Fire / Time, not copied over from my draft to yours
Section 3.3 – Spectrum = Fire / Urgency, not replaced from my draft to yours with… Spectrum Fire / Impact
Section 3.4 – Spectrum = Infectious Disease / Action… seems like it should be retitled if we voted down Infectious Disease.
OET-200 in appendix B, should be “transport issue”
Norm