My comparison
came back clean. All good.
Notedâ for all
the other stuff.
J
Norm
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On Behalf Of Rex Brooks
Sent: October 11, 2021 12:57 PM
To: Paulsen,Norm (ECCC)
<Norm.Paulsen@ec.gc.ca>;
emergency-cap@lists.oasis-open.org; Elysa Jones
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Subject: Re: [emergency-cap] Re: wd04
Norm,
I
didn't touch the TC Front Matter. I'm not sure about that so
I am including Chet for the question of changing copyright
notice to 2021. Chet, could you also advise us on the matter
of keeping a version of the document with all markup left in
for the purpose of having a redline supporting a change log
that will largely be links to the changes documented in Jira
where each issue also includes the date of the meeting notes
where the changes are minuted.
Norm,
I will add a revision with new TOC, replacing existing
document in the SC Committee Notes folder. I should probably
wait until you've done your comparison, or do you want the
revision with the updated TOC uploaded before you do the
comparison?
I
left the markup in so changes can be checked more easily
than it is with a revision that has accepted all changes for
a clean copy. I will do that before submitting the whole
package to TC Admin requesting publication after the TC
votes positively (we hope) to approve the Event Terms List.
Elysa,
should we ask for expedited TC Admin processing so that we
have the TC final and the TC Admin final document?
Cheers,
Rex
On 10/11/2021 9:18 AM, Paulsen,Norm
(ECCC) wrote:
Rex
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The copyright notice still says 2020. Is that correct?
Â
The table of contents is not up to date.
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The document is marked with all the changes? Was it supposed to be?
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I will do a look through and comparison in the morning.
Â
Norm
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From: emergency-cap@lists.oasis-open.org <emergency-cap@lists.oasis-open.org> On Behalf Of Rex Brooks
Sent: October 8, 2021 10:35 PM
To: Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) <Norm.Paulsen@ec.gc.ca>; emergency-cap@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [emergency-cap] Re: wd04Â
Norm,
I note that I completed the changes inline below with "--Done" except for the second "Line 369"Â which I believe was just a transposition for "Line 396" where I made the change.
Rather than make a new working draft, I replaced the existing version with a new revision without a new filename. I will continue this for any further changes.
Cheers,
RexOn 10/8/2021 6:29 PM, Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) wrote:
Rex
Â
In wd04
Â
Line 352 â the word âanâ should be âtheâ --Done
Line 353 â should beâ (i.e. a âwindâ event leading to a âwindâ alert) --Done
Line 367 â missing the word âallâ, should beâall associated to a âtropical stormâ event. --Done
Line 368 â two spaces at the end of the line --Done
Line 369 â two spaces afterâ However --Done
Line 369 â should beâ âsmokeâ event (took a bit of looking, but I think this should be Line 396) --Done
Line 403 â missing comma after the word âbothâ --Done
Line 404 â The word Practices should start a new paragraph --Done
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An extra entry in Appendix B... OET-144 Heavy Rain --Done and the code was automatically corrected
1.ÂÂÂÂÂÂ Not sure how that got inserted in there. Its not even alphabetical so something seems wrong.
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Norm Paulsen
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