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Subject: Re: [humanorg] clarification on my edits
Thanks, James, I appreciate all the work. I'm hoping to get back to writing, and maybe even some actual thinking again late this evening. At some point, probably tomorrow, I need to take a few hours off and let my brain sort of hit its reset button. I'm sure there's forest around here some place, its just that its hard to find with all these darn trees in the way... Ciao, Rex At 3:13 PM -0600 11/26/03, James Landrum wrote: >In further review I discover that there is a section in the draft >after the references cited - so please note that my most recent post >of edits of the draft do not include edits to last 7 pages, e.g., >pages 17-23 of the text following the references cited section, and >also understand that does impact my previous comments about the >content detail. At this time I believe it is appropriate for me to >wait for the next version by Rex to be submitted to the group >before I make additional edits, and during the interim will focus >on creation of appropriate powerpoint slides. > >James Landrum wrote: > >>correct file CollanExpWrkshpPaper-JL-edits.doc >>Sorry if the previous send of the wrong file (outdated- delete it) >>caused confusion, and yes, I realize that other contributions to >>paper and main body on NYAM proof of concept has not yet been >>incorporated into the draft (per previous comments below). >> >>James Landrum wrote: >> >>>Rex et al., and Rex please understand that I intend this as kind >>>and constructive feedback: >>> I have gone through the paper briefly and made editorial changes >>>(minor phrase changes, minor typo error corrections, insertion of >>>definition of acronyms when first presented, etc., and minor >>>clarifications, including addition of a couple URLs and >>>references) and IMPORTANTLY: >>> As presented the paper content does not address the specifics >>>implied in the sub TITLE, i.e., it does not describe in detail the >>>scopes and goals and initial results of the pilot project: >>> >>>Proof of Concept for Public Healthcare Preparedness Portal >>> >>>for the New York Academy of Medicine >>> >>>Featuring the Common Alerting Protocol >>> >>> Also, I believe it is advisable to rearrange the sections and >>>first introduce OASIS, the HumanML TC asnd HPCDML SC, and very >>>briefly indicate the range of collaborating research participates >>>and units, and then describe missions for both HumanMarkup >>>Language and Human Physical Characteristics Description Markup >>>Language, then explain how these are used and fit in with WSRP and >>>CAP, then describe the specific pilot project, and summarize and >>>then if there is room in the paper, discuss the other related >>>research collaborations, e.g., the ATL stuff. I have no object if >>>due to limitations of space allocation that the related research >>>sections be withheld and used in other presentations at later date >>>as appropriate. >>> >>>Rex Brooks wrote: >>> >>>>Presentation >>>>Hi Everyone, >>>> >>>>Here is the first, as-yet-somewhat-incomplete, draft of the >>>>presentation paper and powerpoint slideshow. >>>> >>>>For a variety of reasons I would prefer that everyone, except >>>>James and Russell confine your proofreading, comments and >>>>suggestions to email messages, citing the subheads for sections >>>>or the slide numbers under which these corrections, comments and >>>>suggestions occur. If you are contributing visuals, you can >>>>either use the format I have used for the slides, if you want to >>>>produce slides (which I would discourage, with the exception of >>>>James and Rob), or else please confine your efforts to creating >>>>images or animations which I can resize or edit to fit. I will be >>>>citing everyone who works on this as contributors and each of you >>>>as authors for the specific sections in which you write, produce >>>>images, slides or animations for us, so please indicate how you >>>>wish to be listed and how you wish your references cited. I will >>>>be compiling and editing the Bibliographic Appendices last. In >>>>the meantime I will include reference citations inline where they >>>>appear in your individual contributions. >>>> >>>>For those of you who are still working on your individual subject >>>>area contributions, please send me what you have by end of day, >>>>Saturday, Nov. 29, 2003. I plan to compile the first full draft >>>>and provide it for proofing Sunday night, November 30, 2003 or >>>>Monday morning, Dec. 1, 2003. >>>> >>>>Please Note: the animations are only placeholders, and many >>>>samples are not yet included because I simply don't have them yet >>>>and beyond the animations, I did not want to include a lot of >>>>placeholders. Rob is working on a new animation, James and Sylvia >>>>are working on specific slides and Sylvia is working on her >>>>sections for Cultural Descriptions and Cognition overview. I have >>>>not asked Chandra for a write up of his Mediation SC which is >>>>under construction, and there are personal intervening >>>>circumstances that have understandably delayed his efforts. >>>> >>>>If you want to preview how the Portal functionality has been >>>>designed (but not a final version of how it will appear or work >>>>when displayed during demonstration go to: >>>> >>>><http://www.starbourne.com/NYAM/NYAMPortal/NYAM-CAP-Portal1.html>http://www.starbourne.com/NYAM/NYAMPortal/NYAM-CAP-Portal1.html >>>> >>>>for the first screen and the functionality of the individual Map >>>>and Medical portlets >>>> >>>><http://www.starbourne.com/NYAM/NYAMPortal/NYAM-CAP-Portal2.html>http://www.starbourne.com/NYAM/NYAMPortal/NYAM-CAP-Portal2.html >>>> >>>>for the CAP Incident screen >>>> >>>>In the actual Portal both of the portlets will be interactive >>>>while remaining within the overall Portal Page. >>>> >>>>I have not yet decided to what depth I will go in describing Web >>>>Services for Remote Portlets, since there is a completely >>>>separate presentation being polished by the chair of that TC for >>>>presentation Dec. 10 at XML2003. >>>> >>>>We will also be attending Owen Ambur's Town Hall Meeting at >>>>XML2003 the evening of Dec. 9 after our presentation at the >>>>workshop. >>>> >>>>All in all, I think this is sufficient for now. You should have >>>>enough to absorb and we have a schedule to keep, so on to making >>>>the servlet that is sitting on my plate. >>>> >>>>Ciao, >>>>Rex >>>>-- >>>> >>>>Rex Brooks >>>>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison, Berkeley, CA, 94702 USA, Earth >>>>W3Address: <http://www.starbourne.com>http://www.starbourne.com >>>>Email: <mailto:rexb@starbourne.com>rexb@starbourne.com >>>>Tel: 510-849-2309 >>>>Fax: By Request >>>> >>>> >>>>To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: >>>><mailto:humanorg-unsubscribe@yahoogroups.com>humanorg-unsubscribe@yahoogroups.com >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>>Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to the >>>><http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/>Yahoo! Terms of Service. >>>> >>> >>>-- >>>From the desk of James [Jim] E. Landrum III >>>Archaeology Materials and Database Manager, >>>Archaeology Technologies Laboratory (ATL), >>>North Dakota State University (NDSU). >>>Ph. 701-231-7115 FAX: 701-231-1047 >>>Email: <mailto:james.landrum@ndsu.nodak.edu>james.landrum@ndsu.nodak.edu >>>ATL Web Site: <http://atl.ndsu.edu>http://atl.ndsu.edu >>>Digital Archive Network for Anthropology and World Heritage (DANA-WH) >>>DANA-WH Web Site: <http://www.dana-wh.net>http://www.dana-wh.net >>> >> >>-- >>From the desk of James [Jim] E. Landrum III >>Archaeology Materials and Database Manager, >>Archaeology Technologies Laboratory (ATL), >>North Dakota State University (NDSU). >>Ph. 701-231-7115 FAX: 701-231-1047 >>Email: <mailto:james.landrum@ndsu.nodak.edu>james.landrum@ndsu.nodak.edu >>ATL Web Site: <http://atl.ndsu.edu>http://atl.ndsu.edu >>Digital Archive Network for Anthropology and World Heritage (DANA-WH) >>DANA-WH Web Site: <http://www.dana-wh.net>http://www.dana-wh.net >> > >-- >From the desk of James [Jim] E. Landrum III >Archaeology Materials and Database Manager, >Archaeology Technologies Laboratory (ATL), >North Dakota State University (NDSU). >Ph. 701-231-7115 FAX: 701-231-1047 >Email: <mailto:james.landrum@ndsu.nodak.edu>james.landrum@ndsu.nodak.edu >ATL Web Site: <http://atl.ndsu.edu>http://atl.ndsu.edu >Digital Archive Network for Anthropology and World Heritage (DANA-WH) >DANA-WH Web Site: <http://www.dana-wh.net>http://www.dana-wh.net > >Yahoo! Groups Sponsor >ADVERTISEMENT ><http://rd.yahoo.com/SIG=12cv4s7ed/M=267637.4116730.5333196.1261774/D=egroupweb/S=1706030390:HM/EXP=1069967595/A=1853618/R=0/*http://www.netflix.com/Default?mqso=60178338&partid=4116730> > > > >To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: >humanorg-unsubscribe@yahoogroups.com > > > >Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to the ><http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/>Yahoo! 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