Re: [huml] JL-edits of paper attached

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

Thanks James,

I am going to let Russell attend to incorporating the corrections, 
rather than make myself any crazier than I am. I appreciate the work 
and effort. I think this is going to be a very good 
presentation.Coming from an old curmudgeon like me, that;s saying 
something.

Ciao,
Rex

At 2:10 PM -0600 12/1/03, James Landrum wrote:
>see attached file, HumanMLinCollabtns-JL-edits-12-01-03.doc
>
>I reviewed and then made corrections to typos as I encountered them 
>(e.g., misspelled words, spacing, etc.). In several places 
>(particularly my section)  I made corrections and inserted additonal 
>citations and added ther correspionding references to Appendix C, 
>References Cited.  Please note that as I read through the paper
>
>  I made a few changes to sentences, to make them more readable (my 
>opinion mostly, but also to correct grammar in afew places), and in 
>several instances made notes (e.g., (NOTE: CITATION and REFERENCE 
>needed here) ) in places where statements are made that I believe 
>need citation and reference. I also added to the end of the section 
>on Data Dictionaries and Thesauri a "see also the related section"" 
>pointer to Sylvia's section on Cultural Descriptions and 
>Linguistics, as those 2 sections discuss independently associated 
>issues of relevance.   I also added an example to Sylvia's sentence 
>that focuses discussion on miscommunication, so that the sentence 
>now reads:
>
>"An iconic usage in one cultural context can be easily misunderstood 
>as idolatry in another, for example, the Taliban's 
>ethnocentrically-biased destruction of Buddhist statuary in 
>Afghanistan in 2001."
>
>For Appendix A, which is the full list of Authors, I suggest 
>appending the Institutional Affiliation to each author's listing. 
>For example, I added a basic affiliation for Rex (Starbourne 
>Communications, Inc., Berkeley, California- Rex, is that correct?), 
>Rob Nixon (Quantum Digital Arts, Inc., Appleton Wisconsin- Rob is 
>that correct?), and for me also.
>
>Previously I suggested reorganizing the paper, i.e., moving whole 
>sections around to acchieve better flow, and even though time is 
>fast slipping away at this juncture, if it is still deemed advisable 
>by yhte group to do that, I will be happy to do that after this 
>current round of edits are submitted to Rex and he send s out the 
>prefinal version.
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