Review of Section 3.4.4 and Appendix A

[Pete Brunet <brunet@us.ibm.com>]

Section 3.4.4, "Allow users to
control Animated Slide Content"

The last sentence needs a little editing,
the grammar is not quite right, i.e.
    Turning off animations
should result in all slide content to appear in their final form (post
animation).
For example, change from "to appear"
to "appearing".  And perhaps changing "in their final
form" to "in its final form".

Appendix A

Would the following reference be of
any use?  NCAM's multimedia guidelines, "Accessible Digital Media
Design Guidelines for Electronic Publications, Multimedia and the Web"
at http://ncam.wgbh.org/publications/adm/ and in particular, "Guideline
H, Provide access to multimedia presentations for users with sensory disabilities."
at http://ncam.wgbh.org/publications/adm/guideline_h.html.

Pete Brunet
                    
                     
                     
         
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