Re: Request to send out OIC TC "Interoperability Profile" for Public Review

[Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>]

Hi Bart,

  I'm not sure you really want this identified as ODF11; seems it should be odf1.1

  The links on the cover page for the html version should not point to a zip file, but to the .html file itself

  The references to OASIS work must include hypertext-linked URIs to the referenced iteration of the specification; there is no such status as 'pre-draft'; it should be Working Draft with an actual identifier (WD01, WD02, etc.)

  If there are no non-normative references that section should be removed.

  Section 3 Conformance subsections are numbered 1.5, 1.7, 2.1..., 3.1..., 4.6, 8.1.3... While you can reference the particular sections within ODF, it should not appear that sections of the document are missing or misnumbered or duplicated in any way.

  Suggestion: number the sections in sequence. Following the title put the ODF1.1 number. You already have the numbers in each clause which is fine.

example: 3.1 Document Processing and Conformance (ODF1.1 Section 1.5)
3.2 MIME Types and File Name Extensions (ODF1.1 Section 1.7)

You could leave out the ODF1.1 since that's clearly stated.


Regards,

Mary




On Feb 12, 2010, at 10:10 AM, Hanssens Bart wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> 
> would it be possible to send out the "ODF 1.1 Interoperability Profile v1.0" for Public Review ?
> Thanks
> 
> 
> Approval by OASIS OIC TC (e-ballot, closed on Feb.9 ):
> 
> - http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/oic/ballot.php?id=1827
> - http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/oic/201002/msg00032.html
> 
> 
> Editable source:
> - http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/36369/ODF11_Interop_Profile-v1.0-cd02.odt
> 
> Other versions:
> - http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/36370/ODF11_Interop_Profile-v1.0-cd02.pdf
> - http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/36371/ODF11_Interop_Profile-v1.0-cd02.html.zip
> 
> 
> Stakeholders to be notified:
> 
> - OASIS ODF TC and ODF Adoption TC,
> - ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34,
> - Rajiv C.Shah, Ph.D (author of "Lost in translation" paper on document interoperability)
>  (Illinois University Chicago, Dept.Communication / email: rshah@a5.com)
> 
> 
> Additional note:
> 
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> 
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> http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OIC/component/10102
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> 
> 
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> Bart Hanssens
> Chair OASIS OIC TC