RE: EXT :[openc2] Groups - OpenC2 Language Specification v1.0 Working Dr

TC members,

I was blocked from voting the document release. I thought I was a voting member, but may have been stripped off the right for some reasons…

Anyway, I’d like to provide my comments below through this informal channel:

- There are too many TBSLs. A first draft should at least provide readers a pretty good understanding of the subject area(s) involved or related

- A few good examples will help readers understand its application for solving real world problems

- Other issues, see attachment for detail

I’d suggest take it back, revise, and send for another TC review before going public.

Thanks,

Jason Liu, CISSP/CISA/CISM, Technical Fellow

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Subject: EXT :[openc2] Groups - OpenC2 Language Specification v1.0 Working Draft 01 uploaded

Submitter's message
This is Working Draft 01 of the Language Spec that will be associated with an upcoming ballot.
-- Mr. Jason Romano

Document Name: OpenC2 Language Specification v1.0 Working Draft 01

Description
General consensus was reached by the Language subcommittee on these
portions of the Language Specification and the Language Subcommittee
recommends its approval. The balance of the Language Specification (to
include portions marked TBSL and TBD in this version) will be provided in
subsequent Working Drafts.

The OpenC2 Language Specification v1.0 Working Draft 01 and all associated
artifacts are packaged together in oc2ls-v1.0-wd01.zip. The PDF version of
the specification will be designated as authoritative. If a full majority
is reached, then the Chair will be directed to perform and task as required
by TC Admin to facilitate the issuance of a 30 day public review.
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Submitter: Mr. Jason Romano
Group: OASIS Open Command and Control (OpenC2) TC
Folder: Documents
Date submitted: 2017-10-31 06:09:29

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