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Subject: Fwd: comments on CS02

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From: èçåå <kazuo.yabuta@gmail.com>
Date: 2022å1æ27æ(æ) 0:59
Subject: comments on CS02
To: <workgroup_mailer@lists.oasis-open.org>


I found inappropriate descriptions for two points and I think they needs to be corrected.
These fixes are three cover pages and Appendix B. and it is not directly related to the specification itself.

(1) Cover page: Invalid affiliation and email address
The affiliations and email addresses of Dr.Kamimura, Dr.Yoshida, and Mr.Yabuta are old information and are invalid. It is necessary to rewrite with the latest information.
Three cover pages are Part 1: Specification, Part 2: Vocabulary, and Part 3: Constraints.
All of the respective cover pages needÂto be updated.

(2) Acknowledgements: Only the member list is available but additional corrections are required.
In addition to the members, I think it is necessary to add an acknowledgment to Nanzan University and Professor Aoyama, the former chairperson.

Kazuo YabutaÂ

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