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Subject: Re: [pkcs11] Groups - CMVP Letter - Draft 3 uploaded
Tim, I made some suggested edits to this that aren't easily expressible in email (they are tracked as changes in the document). A lot of them are stylistic in nature (e.g. two spaces after a period, added commas, un-cap cryptographic modules, changed PKCS#11 to PKCS #11, etc.) It also incorporates John Leiseboer's changes. Please find attached, review, and see what you think -- I didn't upload it to the wiki because you're handling this document. --Chris On Wed, Jun 08, 2016 at 04:42:54PM -0700, Tim Hudson wrote: > Submitter's message > Updated draft addressing JohnL's feedback. > -- Tim Hudson > ----------------- > Document Name: CMVP Letter - Draft 3 > Description > No description provided. > View Details: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/pkcs11/document.php?document_id=58317 > Download Latest Revision: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/pkcs11/download.php/58317/latest/Draft_3a__PKCS11_to_CMVP.docx > Public Download Link: https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=58317&wg_abbrev=pkcs11 > ----------------- > Submitter: Tim Hudson > > Group: OASIS PKCS 11 TC > Folder: Working Drafts > Date submitted: 2016-06-08 16:42:38 > > > ----------------- > >
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