Attached you should find the revised proposal for issue 54 - attempt #10
Changes:
- Under "endpointReference" definition in section 2, deleted the
second sentence that starts "When this element is present...", as we
decided this was redundant with the new normative statement.
- Replaced reference to "runtime" with "SCA runtime" where I had
left it unqualified.
- Updated the normative statement at the end of section 2 to use
the bullet point construction that Anish suggested.
- Updated the first paragraph under section 2.2 with the
agreed-upon text from the chat room - except that I felt it necessary
to tweak the last sentence a little further. Specifically, I came up
with "For example, the service endpoint URI might be produced by
modifying any or all of the host name, the port number, and a portion
of the path." What we had in the chat room didn't quite work for me.
- Updated the third paragraph in section 2.2 with the alternate
text Simon N. proposed in his email.
-Eric.
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