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Subject: Re: [sca-j] SCA-J Working Draft 04 Review Comments
>>> I thought we agreed that we would update the style of the references >>> from [1] to [RFC2119]? Or was this for the Assembly specification? >>> >>> >> >> Can't remember either, so not fixed. >> > I believe that this was discussed and agreed by this TC. If there is > any doubt, let's address this on the call today. Is the TC ok with the editors making this change in cd01-rev1 ? Can we have an action for the editors, so that they don't forget (would have done this now, but have to wait for the CD01 pub to go thru). -Anish -- Simon Nash wrote: > Anish Karmarkar wrote: >> All of these fixed in WD05 except as noted below. >> >> -Anish >> -- >> >> Mark Combellack wrote: >>> Hi, >>> >>> >>> >>> Having reviewed the changes in WD04 version of the SCA-J >>> specifications, I have the following comments: >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> *Editorial issues that should be fixed before we publish a CD* >>> >>> >>> >>> Document Footer: >>> >>> Document version is wrong – it has WD03 but this is WD04 >>> >>> Date is wrong – title page says 15 August 2008 but footer says 27 May >>> 2008-09-15 >>> >>> >>> >>> PDF Document: >>> >>> Page numbers are wrong in the footer. It has Page 1 of 1, Page 2 of >>> 2, etc. The Word document is correct. >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> *Minor Editorial issues that don’t need to be fixed before we publish >>> a CD* >>> >>> >>> >>> Page 7 – line 15 >>> >>> Extra space between end of sentence and full stop (.) >>> >>> >>> >>> Page 17 – line 332 >>> >>> The code is coloured differently to the rest of the document. The >>> keywords public and boolean should be purple >>> >>> Actually – this is a general problem throughout the specification. >>> Some code is coloured – other code is not. >>> >> >> The general problem is not fixed. >> >>> >>> >>> Page 17 – line 359 >>> >>> Text is using the wrong font size (10 point.) The rest of the >>> document uses 9 point font size. This is not visible in the PDF >>> version of the specification but can be seen as the text being “more >>> bold” in the Word version. >>> >>> >>> >>> Page 27 – line 780 >>> >>> Remove extra space between ServiceReference<B> and extends >>> >>> >>> >>> Page 27 – line 795 >>> >>> Supplied is spelt wrongly – in the document it is spelt suppied >>> >>> >>> >>> Page 39 – line 1349 >>> >>> Section is missing example of using @Property with a Constructor. It >>> has examples for the other two cases. >>> >> >> Not done. >> >>> >>> >>> Page 40 – line 1408 >>> >>> Section is missing example of using @Reference with a Constructor. It >>> has examples for the other two cases. >>> >> >> Not done. >> >>> >>> >>> Page 60 – lines 2235 to 2260 >>> >>> Text is using the wrong font size (10 point.) The rest of the >>> document uses 9 point font size. This is not visible in the PDF >>> version of the specification but can be seen as the text being “more >>> bold” in the Word version. >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> *QUESTIONS* >>> >>> >>> >>> I thought we agreed that we would update the style of the references >>> from [1] to [RFC2119]? Or was this for the Assembly specification? >>> >>> >> >> Can't remember either, so not fixed. >> > I believe that this was discussed and agreed by this TC. If there is > any doubt, let's address this on the call today. > > Simon >>> >>> >>> >>> Thanks, >>> >>> >>> >>> Mark >>> >>> Mark Combellack| Software Developer| Avaya | Eastern Business Park | >>> St. Mellons | Cardiff | CF3 5EA | Voice: +44 (0) 29 2081 7624 | >>> mcombellack@avaya.com <mailto:|mcombellack@avaya.com> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that >> generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: >> https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php >> >> > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that > generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: > https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php
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