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Subject: Comments on CD01 - Revision 13d- MC conformance proposal
1) Lines 885 -891 The paragraph that starts "During the deployment of an SCA policySet ..." This ends with "I forget the third option right now" 2) Section 7.1 In the conformance wording for the 3 intents remove the words "and has not been qualified" 3) Typo on line 1801 "altertered." 4) Section 7.2.1 Change line 1814 from "to the transport" to "to the transport or transfer" May be good to add, "such as HTTPS". This needs to be fixed. The other concern is that you and Dave seem to have made changes to the same base document. So, your changes will need to be merged. -- All the best, Ashok
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