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Subject: RE: [sca-policy] Comments on CD01 - Revision 13d- MC conformance proposal
> -----Original Message----- > From: ashok malhotra [mailto:ashok.malhotra@oracle.com] > Sent: 04 February 2009 21:41 > To: Martin Chapman; OASIS Policy > Subject: [sca-policy] Comments on CD01 - Revision 13d- MC conformance proposal > > 1) Lines 885 -891 > The paragraph that starts "During the deployment of an SCA policySet ..." > > This ends with "I forget the third option right now" [<MartinC>] Not my doing. No idea if this was spotted at the F2F though. > > 2) Section 7.1 > In the conformance wording for the 3 intents remove the words "and has > not been qualified" [<MartinC>] By removing these words are you happy that the qualified intents are a specialisation of the unqualified ones? > > 3) Typo on line 1801 "altertered." > > 4) Section 7.2.1 Change line 1814 from "to the transport" to "to the > transport or transfer" > May be good to add, "such as HTTPS". > > This needs to be fixed. > > The other concern is that you and Dave seem to have made changes to the > same base document. > So, your changes will need to be merged. [<MartinC>] I am not making changes to a base document. This a proposal for discussion. The results of that discussion will have to be applied to the baseline. > -- > All the best, Ashok > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that > generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: > https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php
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