RE: [sca-policy] Comments on CD01 - Revision 13d- MC conformance proposal

["Martin Chapman" <martin.chapman@oracle.com>]

> -----Original Message-----
> From: ashok malhotra [mailto:ashok.malhotra@oracle.com]
> Sent: 04 February 2009 21:41
> To: Martin Chapman; OASIS Policy
> Subject: [sca-policy] Comments on CD01 - Revision 13d- MC conformance proposal
> 
> 1) Lines 885 -891
> The paragraph that starts "During the deployment of an SCA policySet ..."
> 
> This ends with "I forget the third option right now"


[<MartinC>] Not my doing. No idea if this was spotted at the F2F though.

> 
> 2) Section 7.1
> In the conformance wording for the 3 intents remove the words "and has
> not been qualified"

[<MartinC>] By removing these words are you happy that the qualified intents are a specialisation of the unqualified ones?


> 
> 3) Typo on line 1801 "altertered."
> 
> 4) Section 7.2.1 Change line 1814 from "to the transport" to "to the
> transport or transfer"
> May be good to add, "such as HTTPS".
> 
> This needs to be fixed.
> 
> The other concern is that you and Dave seem to have made changes to the
> same base document.
> So, your changes will need to be merged.

[<MartinC>] I am not making changes to a base document. This a proposal for discussion. The results of that discussion will have to
be applied to the baseline.


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> All the best, Ashok
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