[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (SOAEERP-15) PR08-E7SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.pdf

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PR08-E7 SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.pdf 
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                 Key: SOAEERP-15
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-15
             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
          Issue Type: Sub-task
          Components: PR Comments
            Reporter: Paul Yang 


    * Lines 10, 11: grammatical error: "...to select _*an*_ optimal
      end-to-end solution." 
   * Lines 134, 135: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 149, 150: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 156, 157: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 160, 161: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 200, 201: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 216, 217: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 220: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 262, 263: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 265, 267, 269, 271, 273, 275: Suggestion: "_*Describes*_
      available operations..."
    * Lines 281, 282: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 285: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 328, 326: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 332: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 352, 353: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 360, 361: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 387, 388: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 394, 395: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 401, 402: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 408, 409: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 412 is formatted in a different typeface/font from the style
      used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of
      body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
    * Note the use of a different typeface for the name of elements
      immediately after a Numbered Section Title in the following
      example does not sufficiently emphasize the name and causes visual
      dissonance, and some text passages continue using that different
      typeface so, IF this is an artifact of the OASIS specification
      template it would be a good idea to point it out, or else use
      italic or bold for emphasis because a different typeface that is
      not significantly different just looks like an unintentional error. 
    * Lines 502, 503: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 583, 584: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 599, 600: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 628, 629: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 635, 636: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 776-778 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
      style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
      of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
    * Line 806-808: grammatical errors: "...implementation silently
      _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is
      allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any
      element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable
      implementation." 

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