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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Issue Comment Edited: (SOAEERP-15) PR08-E7SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.pdf
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Paul Yang edited comment on SOAEERP-15 at 5/24/10 10:13 PM:
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http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37743/SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03-diff-wd08.doc
* Lines 10, 11: grammatical error: "...to select _*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution."
- ?
* Lines 134, 135: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 156, done
* Lines 149, 150: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 164, done
* Lines 156, 157: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 171, done
* Lines 160, 161: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 178, done
* Lines 200, 201: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 222, done
* Lines 216, 217: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 238, done
* Line 220: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 241, done
* Lines 262, 263: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 284, done
* Lines 265, 267, 269, 271, 273, 275: Suggestion: "_*Describes*_ available operations..."
- line 286-296, done
* Lines 281, 282: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 299, done
* Line 285: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 303, done
* Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 342, done
* Lines 328, 326: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 350, done
* Line 332: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 353, done
* Lines 352, 353: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 374, done
* Lines 360, 361: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 382, done
* Lines 387, 388: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 409, done
* Lines 394, 395: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 416, done
* Lines 401, 402: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 423, done
* Lines 408, 409: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 430, done
* Line 412 is formatted in a different typeface/font from the style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
- line 433, done
* Note the use of a different typeface for the name of elements immediately after a Numbered Section Title in the following example does not sufficiently emphasize the name and causes visual dissonance, and some text passages continue using that different typeface so, IF this is an artifact of the OASIS specification template it would be a good idea to point it out, or else use italic or bold for emphasis because a different typeface that is not significantly different just looks like an unintentional error.
- ?
* Lines 502, 503: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 524, done
* Lines 583, 584: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 605, done
* Lines 599, 600: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 621, done
* Lines 628, 629: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 303, done
* Lines 635, 636: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 657, done
* Lines 776-778 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
- line 797, done
* Line 806-808: grammatical errors: "...implementation silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable implementation."
- line 843, there is still a grammatical error. The first "ignore" should have a "s" at the end.
was (Author: paulyang):
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37743/SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03-diff-wd08.doc
* Lines 10, 11: grammatical error: "...to select _*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution."
- ?
* Lines 134, 135: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 156, done
* Lines 149, 150: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 164, done
* Lines 156, 157: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 171, done
* Lines 160, 161: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 178, done
* Lines 200, 201: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 222, done
* Lines 216, 217: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 238, done
* Line 220: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 241, done
* Lines 262, 263: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 284, done
* Lines 265, 267, 269, 271, 273, 275: Suggestion: "_*Describes*_ available operations..."
- line 286-296, done
* Lines 281, 282: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 299, done
* Line 285: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
- line 303, done
* Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 328, 326: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Line 332: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 352, 353: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 360, 361: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 387, 388: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 394, 395: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 401, 402: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 408, 409: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Line 412 is formatted in a different typeface/font from the style
used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of
body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
* Note the use of a different typeface for the name of elements
immediately after a Numbered Section Title in the following
example does not sufficiently emphasize the name and causes visual
dissonance, and some text passages continue using that different
typeface so, IF this is an artifact of the OASIS specification
template it would be a good idea to point it out, or else use
italic or bold for emphasis because a different typeface that is
not significantly different just looks like an unintentional error.
* Lines 502, 503: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 583, 584: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 599, 600: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 628, 629: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 635, 636: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
* Lines 776-778 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
* Line 806-808: grammatical errors: "...implementation silently
_*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is
allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any
element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable
implementation."
> PR08-E7 SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.pdf
> ------------------------------------
>
> Key: SOAEERP-15
> URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-15
> Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
> Issue Type: Sub-task
> Components: PR Comments
> Reporter: Paul Yang
> Assignee: Szu Chang
>
> * Lines 10, 11: grammatical error: "...to select _*an*_ optimal
> end-to-end solution."
> * Lines 134, 135: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 149, 150: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 156, 157: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 160, 161: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 200, 201: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 216, 217: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 220: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 262, 263: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 265, 267, 269, 271, 273, 275: Suggestion: "_*Describes*_
> available operations..."
> * Lines 281, 282: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 285: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 328, 326: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 332: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 352, 353: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 360, 361: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 387, 388: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 394, 395: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 401, 402: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 408, 409: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 412 is formatted in a different typeface/font from the style
> used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of
> body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Note the use of a different typeface for the name of elements
> immediately after a Numbered Section Title in the following
> example does not sufficiently emphasize the name and causes visual
> dissonance, and some text passages continue using that different
> typeface so, IF this is an artifact of the OASIS specification
> template it would be a good idea to point it out, or else use
> italic or bold for emphasis because a different typeface that is
> not significantly different just looks like an unintentional error.
> * Lines 502, 503: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 583, 584: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 599, 600: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 628, 629: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 635, 636: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 776-778 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
> style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
> of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Line 806-808: grammatical errors: "...implementation silently
> _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is
> allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any
> element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable
> implementation."
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