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PR08-E6 SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pdf 
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                 Key: SOAEERP-14
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-14
             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
          Issue Type: Sub-task
          Components: PR Comments
            Reporter: Paul Yang 


   * Line 3: Suggestion "... information exchange on business
      *credibility *reliability and reputation..."
    * Line 8: Suggestiion "The *credibility*, reliability and reputation..."
    * Line 85: Suggestion: "_*The XML vocabulary for Business Rating is
      defined in the XML Schema for this specification with several
      specific rating measurement indicators.*_" 
   * Lines 111-113 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
      style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
      of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
    * Lines 111-113: grammatical error (111, 112) and suggestion (112):
      "Performance:QualityAssestionEvaluation that will _*provide*_ a
      mechanism for Service Rating Entities to _*render*_ their
      evaluation for how well the Service Provider _*fulfills*_ the
      Quality Assertion(s) of its service."
    * Line 131: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 145, 146: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized elements MAY cause
      a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 157: remove white space in element name: An aggregated
      number, in _*<rt:RatingNumeric>*_ element."
    * Line 187: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 202, 203: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 212, 213: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 218, 219: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 226-228 re formatted in a different typeface/font from the
      style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
      of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
    * Lines 227, 228: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 234-235: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 284: Suggestion: "_*Unlike *_the Rating element..."
    * Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 341, 342: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 351, 352: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 361, 362: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 369, 370: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 376, 377: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 383, 384: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 390, 391: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 393, 394: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_.
    * Lines 453, 454 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
      style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
      of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
    * Lines 458-460 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
      style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
      of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
    * Lines 579-582 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
      style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
      of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
    * Line 609-611: grammatical errors, suggestion: "...implementation
      silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute
      is allowed, or silently _*ignores *_unrecognized elements where
      any element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable
      implementation." 

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