[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (SOAEERP-12) PR08-E4 Section:WhitePaper-cd03 Section:*A Guided Tour through the XML VocabularySpecifications*

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Paul Yang  commented on SOAEERP-12:
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http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37833/EERP-Model-UseCase-WhitePaper-cd03-diff-wd08withLineNumber.pdf

bullet #1: " * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in third..."
  line 285, done

bullet #2: " * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in ..."
  line 292, done

bullet #3: " * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in..."
  line 295, done
  line 294, Rex recommends using bSLA instead BSLA, this still needs to be decided by the TC

bullet #4: " * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in..."
  line 300, Rex recommends using bSLA instead BSLA, this still needs to be decided by the TC

bullet #5: " * Suggestion: in SubSection: *EERP Business Quality of Service..."
  line 311-319 Rex recommends using bQoS instead of BQoS.  We are not consistent with abbreviations.

bullet #6: " * Page 15 in first paragraph of Section: *EERP Business Service..."
  line 346, done


> PR08-E4 Section: WhitePaper-cd03  Section:*A Guided Tour through the XML Vocabulary Specifications* 
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: SOAEERP-12
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-12
>             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: PR Comments
>            Reporter: Paul Yang 
>
>     * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in third
>       paragraph: "EERP Business Rating of Services Specification is an
>       XML vocabulary for information exchange on business
>       _*credibility*_, reliability and reputation of the service
>       providers. The _*credibility*_, reliability and reputation..."
>     * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
>       paragraph four "...and to select _*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution."
>     * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
>       paragraph five "...EERP Business Service Level Agreement for
>       *(BSLA)*" should reflect the resolution of the *General Comment*
>       above. Also the words "and evaluate" are in a different font for
>       no apparent reason, so should be changed to match the style of the
>       rest of the paragraph.
>     * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
>       paragraph six: *BSLA* occurs again, please follow resolution of
>       *General Comment *above.
>     * Suggestion: in SubSection: *EERP Business Quality of Service
>       (bQoS) Specification and Schema:* BQoS occurs several times and
>       should be consistent with resolution of *General Comment *above.
>     * Page 15 in first paragraph of Section: *EERP Business Service
>       Level Agreement Specification:* 2nd line: "... service provider
>       for a give service." should be "...service provider for a
>       _*given*_ service." 

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