[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (SOAEERP-13) PR08-E5SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03.pdf

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PR08-E5 SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03.pdf 
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                 Key: SOAEERP-13
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-13
             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
          Issue Type: Sub-task
          Components: PR Comments
            Reporter: Paul Yang 


    * Line 6: grammatical error: "...improve business results. It models
      the business process and the range of potential services, then
      _*guides*_..."
    * Line 10: grammatical error: "..._*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution." 
    * Lines 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 144, 145: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 148, 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 188: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 275: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 327: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
      cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
      MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
    * Line 340: grammatical error: "... This is an extensibility
      mechanism to allow different (extensible) _*properties*_..."
    * Lines 451, 452 and 453 are formatted in a different typeface/font
      from the style used throughout the rest of specification for that
      kind of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
    * Lines 465-467: grammatical errors: "... implementation silently
      _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is
      allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any
      element is allowed, _*it*_ should be considered as interoperable
      implementation." 

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