[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (SOAEERP-12) PR08-E4 Section:WhitePaper-cd03 Section:*A Guided Tour through the XML VocabularySpecifications*

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PR08-E4 Section: WhitePaper-cd03  Section:*A Guided Tour through the XML Vocabulary Specifications* 
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                 Key: SOAEERP-12
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-12
             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
          Issue Type: Sub-task
          Components: PR Comments
            Reporter: Paul Yang 


    * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in third
      paragraph: "EERP Business Rating of Services Specification is an
      XML vocabulary for information exchange on business
      _*credibility*_, reliability and reputation of the service
      providers. The _*credibility*_, reliability and reputation..."
    * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
      paragraph four "...and to select _*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution."
    * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
      paragraph five "...EERP Business Service Level Agreement for
      *(BSLA)*" should reflect the resolution of the *General Comment*
      above. Also the words "and evaluate" are in a different font for
      no apparent reason, so should be changed to match the style of the
      rest of the paragraph.
    * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
      paragraph six: *BSLA* occurs again, please follow resolution of
      *General Comment *above.
    * Suggestion: in SubSection: *EERP Business Quality of Service
      (bQoS) Specification and Schema:* BQoS occurs several times and
      should be consistent with resolution of *General Comment *above.
    * Page 15 in first paragraph of Section: *EERP Business Service
      Level Agreement Specification:* 2nd line: "... service provider
      for a give service." should be "...service provider for a
      _*given*_ service." 

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