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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Issue Comment Edited: (SOAEERP-13) PR08-E5SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03.pdf
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-13?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=19303#action_19303 ] Paul Yang edited comment on SOAEERP-13 at 5/21/10 5:13 AM: ------------------------------------------------------------ bullet #1: " * Line 6: grammatical error: "...improve business results. It models ..." line 14, done bullet #2: " * Line 10: grammatical error: "..._*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution." " line 18, change is not implemented, "an" is not added bullet #3: " * Lines 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... " line 158-159, done bullet #4: " * Lines 144, 145: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... " line 167-168, done bullet #5: " * Lines 148, 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... " line 173-174, done bullet #6: " * Line 188: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY..." line 216-217, done bullet #7: " * Line 275: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY ..." line 306-307, done bullet #8: " * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes ..." line 360-361, done bullet #9: " * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes..." line 373-374, done bullet #10: " * Line 340: grammatical error: "... This is an extensibility ..." line 376, done bullet #11: " * Lines 451, 452 and 453 are formatted in a different typeface/font..." line 490-492, done bullet #12: " * Lines 465-467: grammatical errors: "... implementation silently..." line 521-522, done was (Author: paulyang): bullet #1: " * Line 6: grammatical error: "...improve business results. It models ..." line 14, done bullet #2: " * Line 10: grammatical error: "..._*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution." " line 18, change is not implemented, "an" is not added bullet #3: " * Lines 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... " line 158-159, done bullet #4: " * Lines 144, 145: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... " line 167-168, done bullet #5: " * Lines 148, 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... " line 173-174, done bullet #6: " * Line 188: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY..." line 216-217, done bullet #7: " * Line 275: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY ..." line 306-307, done bullet #8: " * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes ..." line 360-361, done bullet #9: " * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes..." line 373-374, done > PR08-E5 SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03.pdf > ------------------------------------ > > Key: SOAEERP-13 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-13 > Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC > Issue Type: Sub-task > Components: PR Comments > Reporter: Paul Yang > > * Line 6: grammatical error: "...improve business results. It models > the business process and the range of potential services, then > _*guides*_..." > * Line 10: grammatical error: "..._*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution." > * Lines 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 144, 145: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 148, 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 188: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 275: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 327: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 340: grammatical error: "... This is an extensibility > mechanism to allow different (extensible) _*properties*_..." > * Lines 451, 452 and 453 are formatted in a different typeface/font > from the style used throughout the rest of specification for that > kind of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. > * Lines 465-467: grammatical errors: "... implementation silently > _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is > allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any > element is allowed, _*it*_ should be considered as interoperable > implementation." -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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