[OASIS Issue Tracker] Issue Comment Edited: (SOAEERP-13) PR08-E5SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03.pdf

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Paul Yang  edited comment on SOAEERP-13 at 5/21/10 5:14 AM:
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http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37750/SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03-diff-wd08.doc

bullet #1: " * Line 6: grammatical error: "...improve business results. It models ..."
  line 14, done

bullet #2: " * Line 10: grammatical error: "..._*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution." "
  line 18, change is not implemented, "an" is not added

bullet #3: " * Lines 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... "
  line 158-159, done
 
bullet #4: " * Lines 144, 145: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... "
  line 167-168, done

bullet #5: " * Lines 148, 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... "
  line 173-174, done

bullet #6: " * Line 188: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY..."
  line 216-217, done

bullet #7: " * Line 275: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY ..."
  line 306-307, done

bullet #8: " * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes ..."
  line 360-361, done

bullet #9: " * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes..."
  line 373-374, done

bullet #10: " * Line 340: grammatical error: "... This is an extensibility ..."
  line 376, done

bullet #11: " * Lines 451, 452 and 453 are formatted in a different typeface/font..."
  line 490-492, done

bullet #12: " * Lines 465-467: grammatical errors: "... implementation silently..."
  line 521-522, done

      was (Author: paulyang):
    
bullet #1: " * Line 6: grammatical error: "...improve business results. It models ..."
  line 14, done

bullet #2: " * Line 10: grammatical error: "..._*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution." "
  line 18, change is not implemented, "an" is not added

bullet #3: " * Lines 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... "
  line 158-159, done
 
bullet #4: " * Lines 144, 145: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... "
  line 167-168, done

bullet #5: " * Lines 148, 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes... "
  line 173-174, done

bullet #6: " * Line 188: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY..."
  line 216-217, done

bullet #7: " * Line 275: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY ..."
  line 306-307, done

bullet #8: " * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes ..."
  line 360-361, done

bullet #9: " * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes..."
  line 373-374, done

bullet #10: " * Line 340: grammatical error: "... This is an extensibility ..."
  line 376, done

bullet #11: " * Lines 451, 452 and 453 are formatted in a different typeface/font..."
  line 490-492, done

bullet #12: " * Lines 465-467: grammatical errors: "... implementation silently..."
  line 521-522, done
  
> PR08-E5 SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03.pdf 
> ------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: SOAEERP-13
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-13
>             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: PR Comments
>            Reporter: Paul Yang 
>
>     * Line 6: grammatical error: "...improve business results. It models
>       the business process and the range of potential services, then
>       _*guides*_..."
>     * Line 10: grammatical error: "..._*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution." 
>     * Lines 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
>       MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
>     * Lines 144, 145: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
>       MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
>     * Lines 148, 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
>       MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
>     * Line 188: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
>       cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
>     * Line 275: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
>       cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
>     * Line 327: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
>       cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
>     * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
>       MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
>     * Line 340: grammatical error: "... This is an extensibility
>       mechanism to allow different (extensible) _*properties*_..."
>     * Lines 451, 452 and 453 are formatted in a different typeface/font
>       from the style used throughout the rest of specification for that
>       kind of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
>     * Lines 465-467: grammatical errors: "... implementation silently
>       _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is
>       allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any
>       element is allowed, _*it*_ should be considered as interoperable
>       implementation." 

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