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Subject: explanation of edits and issue resolutions to section 4.1


per action from just completed call...

section 4: added paragraph under Figure 18 to set context for relationship between models to be introduced in following.

section 4.1: added 3rd bullet to list to reflect discussion

section 4.1.1.2.1: added paragraph under Figure 21 to reflect discussion with Jeff.  Note, figure needs to be updated per comment.

section 4.1.1.2.2: modified paragraph after Figure 22 to reflect comment that must emphasize this is how one finds out about presence, not the presence itself.  Note, figure needs to be updated per comment.

section 4.1.1.2.3: Responds to Issue 126.  Added 3rd paragraph to introduce concept and point to later discussion.

section 4.1.1.2.4: Responds to Issue 127.  Added 4th paragraph to introduce concept and point to later discussion.  Also, there are several comments asking whether indicated content should move to Policy section.

section 4.1.2.2: 1st paragraph modified per discussion to tie back to RM

section 4.1.2.2: paragraph under Figure 26 modified to reflect some of Action discussion and better discuss Figure 26. Note, figure needs to be updated from that used in RA tutorial.

section 4.1.2.2.3: added 2nd and 3rd paragraphs to provide example of execution context.

section 4.1.2.2.3: added to paragraph beginning "While the execution context captures ..." to clarify relationship between Process Model and Interaction Log

section 4.1.2.2.3: corrected Figure 28 title

Attached spreadsheet contains proposed resolutions beginning with issue 126 (line 102) through issue 54 (line 112).

Ken

PD1-issue-080828-R2(KJL).xls



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Ken Laskey

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