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Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] New draft, WD09-20120808

Attached is a proposed revision of the conformance section.  Most is wordsmithing the first subsection.  I’ve saved it hiding the Track Changes so it is more readable.  You can view the specific changes as useful.





Dr. Kenneth Laskey

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From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Peter F Brown
Sent: Wednesday, August 08, 2012 10:54 PM
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-ra] New draft, WD09-20120808



As promised, and slightly earlier than planned, here is the new draft, with all items of the punch list addressed.


The texts to be checked through in particular are:

-          Kevin’s section 5.2 on security (I included his most recent edits from this Saturday);

-          My new proposal regarding section 6, taking on Ken and Rex’s suggestions along with my earlier draft


Have at it….use line numbers of the PDF for any comments…






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Peter F Brown

Independent Consultant

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