Hi,
As promised, and slightly earlier than planned, here is the new draft, with all items of the punch list addressed.
The texts to be checked through in particular are:
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Kevin’s section 5.2 on security (I included his most recent edits from this Saturday);
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My new proposal regarding section 6, taking on Ken and Rex’s suggestions along with my earlier draft
Have at it….use line numbers of the PDF for any comments…
Regards,
Peter
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