Peter
One slight mis-alignment I’ve spotted. In the PL at line 909 we say MUST use the Policy Product Matrix etc but the Primer says SHOULD at line 337. We changed the PL at the last minute so perhaps you didn’t follow that through into the Primer?
Otherwise looks good to me.
John
From: tgf@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tgf@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Peter F Brown
Sent: 14 November 2011 05:06
To: 'TGF TC List'
Subject: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft
Hi,
As promised in my mail of last Thursday (10 November), I am pleased to announce finalisation of a new draft of the TGF Primer.
Please refer back to that e-mail for details about the process so far and the next steps.
Fewer comments were made against the Primer document. However, a number of further changes have been made in order to align the text with the changes proposed to the Core Patterns document (terminology, update of figures, structure and ordering of sections etc).
Attached is a .pdf version of the document showing all changes made and comments cross-referencing issues raised or alignment with the Core Patterns document. A .docx version will also be loaded to the OASIS work area, for those of you who need access to an editable version.
Best regards,
Peter
Peter F Brown
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Using Information Technologies to Empower and Transform
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