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Subject: Index review #2

Not much more to report from my QA pass of the latest index (and brief look
associated SC documents).

The links look OK. Fabio's link analysis didn't seem to have looked at jpg's
gif's but these links looked OK too.

A few other comments (but I don't think any of the following warrant any
at this stage, e.g. for SC document editing)

1.  Typo in Section D.2

Jon wrote:
> | D.2 first paragraph "be specified, as must the "fittings&#x201D
> | (handles, stays etc.)"
> Is there a change here?

There is a semi-colon missing from "“fittings&#x201D"

2.  In Appendix D

"Also included are printed versions of each example document created by
generating PDF files from the example instances in accordance with the
formatting specifications referenced in Appendix C."

And headings "Generated printouts"
I'd still maintain that these pdf's are none of them 'generated' but perhaps
I'm just
nit-picking here.

3.  In the Appendix D pdf's. in the Joinery ones, some table headers have
overflowing the line. This I couldn't solve previously due to problems with
too much text
for the width of the A4 page, but if anyone has any time to try again...

4. NDR Checklist
ELD1 There is still mention of 'Control Schema' which should be changed to
'Document Schema'.
There are also spellings of 'specialised' instead of 'specialized' but Tim
already pointed this out.

5. Customization Paper
There are examples where the prefix for the CCP Schema Module namespace is
ubl: when it should be ccts:
It may be that the use of pseudo-prefixes (for want of a better term -
sorry) such as
ubl: in the NDR document has led to this possible confusion.

6. Section B.3  - Just one minor typo

"These advantages were felt to outweigh ...


...was also capable of verifying model integrity."

And that's all I could find

All the best


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