Re: [uima] UIMA TC Final Comments DUE May 9th -- Action Required.

[Karin Verspoor <Karin.Verspoor@uchsc.edu>]

My comments through 3.7:

- 3.4.3: would it be worthwhile to briefly describe a use case for an Analyzer that processes multiple Sofas, just to make it clear when the list of Sofas might contain > 1 element?

- 3.4.5 (Figure 20): the text should explicitly state somewhere that the Keys object is to represent the set of active analytics.  It doesn't appear to be referenced in the text at all and this is confusing.

- 3.4.7.7 (Figure 22): would you merge info from the sub-CASes back into the original CAS potentially?

1344/5: take the (However ...) comment out, since we're not?

1376 paragraph: Some intro text on OCL might be nice here, e.g. "A developer may choose to represent Behavioral Metadata using OCL, the Object Constraint Language..."

1383: Place is required in the definition below this text (line 1393). Do you mean for it to be optional?

1446: "might not" or "will not"??

1743, footnote 4: specify in the second sentence that this could be an application-specific extension, to clarify that it is not an intended part of the standard?

Typos by line number:

857: delete "has"

867: change "that identify" to "identifying"

927: change "FlowController is" to "FlowController captures" ?

940: delete "the"

1107: insert space after between "Section" and "3.1.7"

1075: insert comma after "operations"

1082: insert apostrophe before the 's' on "Multipliers"

1092: capitalize MUST

1093: insert space after between "Section" and "3.1.7"

1008: Section numbering is wrong, I think it should be 3.4.8

1013: delete "is"

1017: add 's' to argument

1219: change "Relation" to "Organization"

1233: change "Document" to "TextDocument" to be consistent with line 1227

1289: "Translates" -> "This translates"

1344: insert "could" after "prefix"

1516: add colon to end of line

1540: "Behavior" -> "Behavioral"

1557/1558: delete parentheses

1686: delete "Many kinds of"

1724/5: add quotes around section title

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Karin Verspoor, PhD
Research Assistant Professor
Center for Computational Pharmacology, University of Colorado Denver
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