Re: [virtio] csd01 and csprd01 - v2

[Rusty Russell <rusty@au1.ibm.com>]

"Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> writes:
> OK rusty and me addressed these comments, except two items:
>
>> Paul Knight wrote:
>>     >   -- Add a "/" after "Committee Specification Draft 01" then a soft
>>     return and
>>     > then, aligned under "Committee Spec…" put "Public Review Draft 01". For
>>     an
>>     > example, see
>>     > http://docs.oasis-open.org/pkcs11/pkcs11-curr/v2.40/csprd01/pkcs11-curr-v2.40-csprd01.html
>
> In this example, there's no break after "/" and neither is there
> in the CMIS specification. I decided we should go by these examples so no
> break here either - it looks prettier.

I think Paul is referring to the one on the title pagem where it's:

        Committee Specification Public Review Draft /
        Public Review Draft 01 

Which looks correct.

>> Chet Ensign wrote:
>>    >   -- If possible, in the PDF, align the left margins. That
>>    > is, align
>>    "This
>>    > version:" etc. with "Specification URIs". Not aligned now. 
>>    >
>
> I could not figure how to fixing this one out yet.  As this is
> cosmetic and does not affect page numbering etc, I think we can
> if necessary fix it after we vote, but pls note it appears like
> this in e.g. CMIS.

Hmm, I thought I fixed this, but obviously didn't.  Not sure either...

Thanks,
Rusty.