RE: [ws-rx-editors] RX nits

[Doug Davis <dug@us.ibm.com>]

Fixed in the version w/Marc edits.  Will
check it in soon.

thanks
-Doug
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"Patil, Sanjay" <sanjay.patil@sap.com>

03/22/2007 05:34 PM

To	Doug Davis/Raleigh/IBM@IBMUS, <ws-rx-editors@lists.oasis-open.org>
cc	<mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>
Subject	RE: [ws-rx-editors] RX nits

Doug,
 
I think there is one (I guess
minor) correction due:
 
First sentence under the Status
section reads: This document was last
revised or approved by the WS-RX on the above date. 
 
I think we need to add "Technical
Committee" after "WS-RX".
 
-- Sanjay

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From: Doug Davis [mailto:dug@us.ibm.com]
Sent: Thursday, Mar 22, 2007 8:47 AM
To: ws-rx-editors@lists.oasis-open.org
Cc: mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org
Subject: [ws-rx-editors] RX nits


Couple of things I wanted to mention as I was preparing a draft with Marc's
proposal: 
- I'm updating the dates to be April 5th 
- I put Marc's text in a slightly different spot than his proposal - as
I think it makes more sense to have it in the Namespace section to explain
why 'wsp' isn't in the table.  Is this ok with people? If so, I'll
send a note to the RX list with this proposed change.
- Robin, a while ago, noticed that the WSRMP spec doesn't have a space
between "Reliable" and "Messaging" in the title - while
the RM spec itself does.  Figured I'd add that space.
- The references in the specs refer to the RM specs as "Committee
Drafts".  Mary - will it be against OASIS policy to change
those to "Committee Specifications" if/when we approve them as
CSs?  I know it not part of the 'approved list' of edits after a CS
vote. 

I've attached the specs to this note so people can review my edits - please
look over everything!  :-) 


thanks
-Doug
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