[ws-tx] NEW Issue - WS-BA PR01 Errata (Issues 106, 107, 108 andmiscellaneous deltas)

[Thomas Freund <tjfreund@us.ibm.com>]

Proposed list of changes to the WS-BA/PR (as the result of 106, 107, 108 + misc. deltas)

1. Change: "business activity" to "Business Activity", Abstract (x2), lines 16, 187, 369, 372, 389, 402, 410, 444, 447, 558, 562.

2. Delete extra spaces
2a. after period: lines 3, 4, 6, 9, 10, 18 (x2), 19, 27, 39, 42, 45, 51, 53, 54, 56, 59, 61, 63, 66, 76, 172, 182, 184, 200, 206, 207, 208, 213, 216, 228, 230, 237, 244, 277, 281, 307, 324, 326, 328, 349, 451, 452, 458, 459, 460 (x2), 467, 470, 471, 472, 483, 486 (x2), 488, 489, 491, 493, 495, 499, 502, 517, 521, 537, 542, 546, 551, 559, 563, 566 (x2),
2b. between words: line 332 ("its coordinator").
2c. after " :" line 571.

3. Issue 102, #14 - Indent all bullets: lines 13, 15, 23, 24, 25, 27, 29, 32, 35, 36, 39, 51, 55 (dash), 58 (dash), 61, 65, 68, 86, 87, 89, 90, 92, 93, 96, 98, 178, 180, 212, 215, 414, 417, 462, 463, 464, 465, 476, 478, 480, 482, 485, 488, 493, 501, 504, 510, 513, 621, 625.

4. Add cross-references
4a. [WSCOOR]; lines 78, 171,
4b. [WSSec]: line 78
4c. Appendix C: lines 309, 329
4d. [WSPOLICY]: line 370
4e. [WSPOLICYATTACH]: line 411

5. line 82, change "The key words ... " to "The uppercase key words ..."

6. Section 1.4, Namespace, Prefix S11, format namespace using 'bold'

7. lines 111 & 112, convert lines to bullets

8. lines 127-129, delete [URI] reference (result of Issue 102)

9. Issue 106
9a. change lines 171-172 from
"Business Activity builds on WS-Coordination, which defines an Activation service and a Registration service.
to
"Business Activity builds on WS-Coordination [WS-COOR], which defines an Activation service, a Registration service, and a coordination context type". (includes #4a:171)
9b. change lines 174-175 from
"The Business Activity coordination context MUST flow on all application messages involved with the transaction."
to
"The Business Activity coordination context is a coordination context type defined in this section. Application messages that propagate a transaction using a Business Activity protocol MUST use a Business Activity coordination context. If these application messages use a SOAP binding, the Business Activity coordination context MUST flow as a SOAP header in the message."
9c. change lines 391-392 & 404-405 from
"The transaction MUST be represented as a SOAP header in CoordinationContext format, as defined in WS-Coordination [WS-COOR]."
to
"For application messages that use a SOAP binding, the Business Activity coordination context MUST flow as a SOAP header in the message."


10. change lines 187-188 from
"A business activity uses the WS-Coordination CoordinationContext with the CoordinationType set to one of the following URIs:"
to
"A Business Activity uses a CoordinationContext type set to one of the following URIs:" (includes #1:187)

11. Issue 107: change line 232 & 334 from
"Participants register for this protocol using the following protocol identifier:"
to
"Participants that register for this protocol use the following protocol identifier:"

12. change lines 328-329 from
"If a duplicate message is received it MUST be treated as specified in the state tables described in this document."
to
"If a duplicate message is received it MUST be treated as specified in the state tables [Appendix C: State Tables for the Agreement Protocols]." (includes #4c:329)

13. delete hypen: lines 369, 372

14. change line 412 from
"WS-PolicyAttachment [WS-POLICYATTACH] defines two [WSDL] ..."
to
"WS-PolicyAttachment [WS-POLICYATTACH] defines two WSDL [WSDL] ..."

15, change line 466 from
"It should be noted that the mechanisms listed above are independent of the SCT ..."
to
"It should be noted that the mechanisms listed above are independent of the Security Context Token (SCT) ..."


16. change line 503 & 618-619 from
"... defined in [WSCOOR]."
to
"... defined in WS-Coordination [WS-COOR]."

17. change line 519 from
"Notification messages are normally addressed according to section 3.3 of WS-Addressing ..."
to
"Notification messages are normally addressed according to section 3.3 of WS-Addressing 1.0 - Core [WSADDR] ... "

18. Editors; Delete John Harby.