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Subject: RE: CD 01 PR package


Changes attached and redline of CD with these publication edits.

 

I used cd instead of cd01, the version number of the cd is already in the filename. Actually, so is the fact that it is a cd.

 

 

From: Marc Goodner
Sent: Friday, July 11, 2008 7:33 PM
To: Marc Goodner; mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org; 'Kelvin Lawrence'; Chris Kaler
Cc: wsfed@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: CD 01 PR package

 

Based on your other thread we will not change the ns change. I misread the filename rule and can fix that (I still disagree with that rule, it simply makes building the package and finding the files more difficult). So I can address 4 and 8 now.

 

From: Marc Goodner [mailto:mgoodner@microsoft.com]
Sent: Friday, July 11, 2008 4:53 PM
To: mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org; 'Kelvin Lawrence'; Chris Kaler
Cc: wsfed@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [wsfed] RE: CD 01 PR package

 

For number 3 that would be the editable source. I'll update accordingly.

 

The existing ns rules clearly allow the ns we are using in the document. I see no violation of the rules in terms of where we are requesting to put the documents. The namespace and document locations are consistent with other TCs that also are conformant with the current rules.

 

As such I cannot make the requested changes for 4, 5 and 8 as they are breaking changes to our approved specification.

 

The others seem straightforward. I'll turn around a revision soon.

 

 


From: Mary McRae [marypmcrae@gmail.com] On Behalf Of Mary McRae [mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org]
Sent: Friday, July 11, 2008 1:09 PM
To: Marc Goodner; 'Kelvin Lawrence'; Chris Kaler
Cc: wsfed@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: CD 01 PR package

Hi Marc,

 

  I’m attaching a change-tracked/commented version of the spec – experiment: is this more helpful than just a list of comments?

 

Changes needed:

1.       Need to identify the specific committee draft version (Committee Draft 01, 02, etc.)

2.       Need the exact approval date (25 June 2008, etc.)

3.       TC needs to declare one of the three formats as authoritative; needs to be noted following the specific URI in parens “(Authoritative)”

4.       Documents are not allowed to be “hidden” under namespaces acting as directories. Documents/schemas must be located under the prescribed path (docs.oasis-open.org/wsfed/federation/v1.2/{cd01}/[filename] – where “cd01” is optional but preferred

5.       We are migrating to a system where namespaces are explicitly identified by the use of ‘ns’ in the URI path (which avoids the confusion identified in #4 above). The ns should either immediately precede or follow the tc shortname (i.e. /ns/wsfed/ or /wsfed/ns/)

6.       Date needs to be added to running footer; also remove “OASIS trademark, IPR and other policies apply.”

7.       Conformance section needs to be the last numbered section in the spec immediately preceding Appendix A.

8.       Corresponding changes to the namespace document to reflect the proper file URIs

 

Regards,

 

Mary

 

From: Marc Goodner [mailto:mgoodner@microsoft.com]
Sent: Wednesday, July 02, 2008 2:22 PM
To: mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org; Kelvin Lawrence; Chris Kaler
Cc: wsfed@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: CD 01 PR package

 

Mary, please let me know if everything looks in order.

wsfed-1.2-cd-01-revise.zip

ws-federation-1.2-spec-cd-01-diff.doc



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