RE: [emergency] DE Basics Paper Ver 04-1

["Dee Schur" <dee.schur@oasis-open.org>]

Hi Patrick,
Please see the version I sent <below pdf, attached word> to the MS StC, this
one has the legal edits and recognizes this white paper as a product of the
MS.

The document named Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL) Distribution
Element, v. 1.0  BASICS (EDXL-DE-Basics-WD04-1-cg.pdf) has been submitted by
Mrs. Dee Schur to the OASIS Emergency Steering Committee document
repository.

Document Description:


View Document Details:
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/emergency-sc/document.php?docum
ent_id=33780

Download Document:  
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/emergency-sc/download.php/33780
/EDXL-DE-Basics-WD04-1-cg.pdf

Thanks,
Dee

-----Original Message-----
From: Patrick Gannon [mailto:pgannon@warningsystems.com] 
Sent: Thursday, August 13, 2009 4:04 PM
To: jeff.waters@navy.mil
Cc: emergency@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: [emergency] DE Basics Paper Ver 04-1

Jeff,

Great job you and the other editors have done on this paper.  I went back
through and re-read and found a few edits that need to be made.

1. Shouldn't the date of the document be the date when the document is
approved by the TC?

2. Some of the other standards names needed editing.

3. The URL for the ISO 639 Code Table was incorrect, and that has been
updated.

I trust is you review the edits in the attached version, you will find them
acceptable.


Best regards,

Patrick Gannon
President & COO
Warning Systems, Inc.
+1 256 880 8702 x104  (office)
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-----Original Message-----
From: jeff.waters@navy.mil [mailto:jeff.waters@navy.mil] 
Sent: Tuesday, August 11, 2009 7:25 AM
To: emergency@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [emergency] DE Basics Paper Ver 04-1

A draft version of the DE Basics paper has been uploaded to the EM TC
Documents Outreach folder for your consideration prior to the next EM TC
meeting.  This version (04-1) includes the changes approved by the
Infrastructure Subcommittee.  The link to the document is provided below.

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/emergency/download.php/33721/ED
XL-DE-Basics-WD04-1.doc

EDXL-DE-Basics-WD04-1-cg.doc